Thompson v.s Smith

Intro

So this is my first book I have ever wrote let me know how I can fix it and make it better and I'll b changing the friend name to Brie instead.
intro
Lauren's pov
I woke up to the weather being warm not to hot but not to cold just perfect. she went into the bathroom and took a shower .she decided to wear Hollister
shorts and wear a black and white lace tank top with a tank top underneath.she then moved on to doing her hair and makeup putting her hair up in a messy bun,her makeup was just her unusual of white eyeshadow and eyeliner.she didn't have to put a lot on because she had unique eye color of a blue that looks close to teal.she went to greet her mother and farther and her older brother who got their dads hair color of Brown and has all the girls drooling over his move she got her dads eyes but her mothers natural wavy dirty blonde hair.her mother put chocolate chip pancakes on the table,Lauren had to take her brother to school since he stupidly got a dui and got suspended for a whole year sucks to be him.she was senior same with her brother,once they both brushed their teeth they left for school.both dreading school for different reasons his was that his annoying clingy girlfriend rose will girl him about the dui and not calling her last night.her on the other hand was seeing her ex Cody they guy that every girl wants and play boy ever since they broke up but she's happy to be with her boyfriend Mike.she broke the silence in the car"so bro are ready for our senior year"she asked.he replied"not really,how bout you?""what do you think"she says smartly.he looks at her with something in his eyes that he can't place but says"honestly sis if he tries something at all let me know and I'll handle it, it's my job to protect you"."thank you but I can defend my self against him".they get to school and go I. Seperate ways he goes to his girlfriend and her friends while Lauren goes to Mike and alysia.when she reaches them she overheard them talking about how excited they are to be finally starting their senior year."hey babe I missed you" says mike.before she could even reply alysia squeals and gives her a huge hug.alysia is the opposite of he and has brown hair and hazel eyes her boyfriend chase and her have been dating for about four months.lauren leans onto Mike and kisses him on the mouth. they walk into school.
Codys pov
Cody was already at school for his football practice with the team.they have been undefeated for three years so far .Cody has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes he has six pack and muscles from all the sports he plays.He currently is "dating" Kate but everyone knows that for him dating means a new flavor for each week.his bestfriend nick is catcher he has jet black hair and hazel/brown eyes from his mother,just like Cody he is a player.but unlike Cody he is also best friends with costs ex Lauren who he knows that Cody still has deep feelings for her they dated for two years until she broke up with him because he decided to send a video of him kissing taylor.cody left the feild to freshen up and put his kaki tan shorts and stripped polo shirt on and wait for nick to finsh up getting ready so they could walk into the school together.they entered the school and looked down at
His schedule to find out that he has political science with mr.Matthews but luckily he had his best friend with him in most classes.they walked into his class laughing at a joke that nick made but only to look up to see her his so beautiful perfect ex Lauren sitting in the back with only two seats in the class and they just so happend to be in the back next to her.they went to back nick offered to sit next to her but Cody denied the offer and sat next to her ,he stole a glance towards her only to regret because she looked very hot in thoose shorts and smell so intoxicating he looked away quickly .he going to make her like him again this year and he doesn't care what Mike has to say about it,mike is a douche and she doesn't see that I'm going to change that factor.