Bepanah pyaar

A special birthday os plus the promise I made of an os for my lovely lucky di lucky_lakshmi a ragneil os for a special birthday girl hope ur this birthday is a memorable one.....

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Story starts from  a mountain area it's raining u can see a girl facing her back to the camera when u take it front and see her face is shown which is pale and tears in her eyes ? The question is y ? The girl is thinking a
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From a school lots of children are going here and there wearing uniform and there is a basketball match between the 12a and 12b boys and the girls are hooting for 12a students specially saying one name and that is none other than Neil ya and Neil's face is shown and the 12 b class is the bad boy and girl class but 12 a is Neil's class and his friends are laksh, avni , Swara , raj, Karan  , aryan and the bad boys are karthik , kavya ,kavita ,Nikil , Samay, sahil.... so back to the story the basketball match now it's a tie like 7 to 7 and then the last ball will Neil put a goal or the opponent team put a goal and there it is a goal from Neil and they won the match and all the girls are happy that there crush has won and here in a corner u can see a girl closing eyes and pray and then her face is shown the girl same as the girl in the start she is none other than our princess ragu once she heard the girls shouting she opened her eyes and has a smile yes ur correct guys she loves Neil from the time she understood wht love is ......she is Ragini Gadodia daughter of shekar and janaki gadodia a billionaire only heir of RSJ industry apple of her mom and dad a naughty girl for her family otherwise a innocent person ....
Neil khurana son of narendra khurana and Jaya khurana (from ek sarvagun sampanna good in this story ) second son for his mom and dad loves his parents in the last a caring person loves his friends a lot can do anything for them a calm person and a fun person to be with.....
Back to story after that ragu went from there she is in the same class of Neil but he doesn't knows her but his friends except avni others knows her and also knows about her love for him and tomorrow is the end of the schooling and then next is college ragu found wht college Neil is going to study and joined that college to and again she started admiring him from far and like that college days also finished while she loves him from far and on the last day of college she saw avni proposing Neil and Neil too accepting her and ragus world shattered seeing that she quickly went from there not able to see that even Neil's friends where shocked seeing it they didn't expect this and they were sry for ragu .... after that no college life Neil started going to his fathers company and ragu joined her fathers company in London and in this 1yrs time after that ragu came back to India and she got to know Neil married avni but then after 10 months of marriage he got to know she liked him for money and she left him he was devastated coz one side coz she was his friend and other side he never loved her truly but respected her as a friend.... then after that one day
Shekar and janaki is getting ready and then ragu enters her mansion in working outfit and saw her parents is ready to go somewhere so she asked
Ragu : ma baba where are u both going
Shekar: woh one of my fat friends anniversary party so that's y u also have to come pls
Ragu : but baba who can I come I don't no any one there na
Shekar: for ur baba doll come na pls
Ragu : ok fine
Shekar: I have kept a dress for u wear it and come we r waiting she nods and goes to her room and starts dressing and comes down in this dress

And then they goes to khurana mansion yes guys correct it's Neil's parents anniversary.. she doesn't know it and then they enters before they enter a bus family enters with avni (she is here becoz her parents are yet friends with Neil's parents but Neil's parents and avni a parents knows that they r divorced and avnis parents are angry with her but as they r her mom and dad so they just left her and here she is she still thinks he loves her but truth is he never loved her ...😉 I'm sry for avneil fans sry for making avni bad but it's needed for my story pls forgive me for that ...)
Avni is standing with her parents smiling and then Neil all of a sudden turns and sees and smiles whom does he smile for avni na na 😏back of her the gadodia family is there he smiles while seeing ragu neil is looking handsome in that red and black With a bronze touch on the suit ....

Ragu and Neil's eyes meet and they have a eyelock and ragu breaks it avni thinks he is smiling seeing her she goes near him but then she got to know he is seeing somewhere else and turns and sees he is seeing ragu and she gets angry and all Neil's friends notices it and laughs silently and thinks now Neil is on the correct track ... and his father calls him and then introduces him to Ragini and her mother and father and then he shakes hands with them and then he forwards his hand to shake hand with her but she says namaste and then he gets disappointed and just smiles and says hi and then a person enters looking dashing

Shivin Narang as shivin Malhotra a business man and a close friend of ragu from childhood loves her a lot as a friend and respects her has only father mother died when he was small and knows about ragus love too agreed came to khuranas party coz he was also invited he come near ragu and hugs her and Neil gets angry seeing it. And then he couldn't take it anymore went to Ragini and kneel down and proposed her and ragu and her family is shocked ragu is shocked and not understanding why he is proposing her coz she doesn't know that Neil is divorced.... and then she looks at avni who is angry he sees where she is seeing and tells that he loves her soo much accept him and also says that avni loved him for money and then now she is hear coz of the party only she gets happy knowing it she looks at shivin Neil frowns seeing it but next wht made him happy is that shivin nod his head and she smiles and gives her hand accepting his proposal and then narendra khurana and shekar gadodia is happy they became relatives now and they announced there wedding day is day after tomorrow.... and the time came where
It's the wedding day and the gadodia house is beautifully arranged and looking grandly and then a mandap is made in the middle and Neil is sitting and waiting until his true love and comes and there she comes and he gets mesmerized seeing her and then she sat next to him and the pandit started the mantra and then he tied the mangalsutra and put sindoor in her maang making her his and then they do the bidai and they go to khurana mansion on the way a car got crashed to a Lorry and blasted and then everything becomes smoke and u can see two people holding hands and looking at the car and the body ya guys it's none other than ragu it's the same place where ragu was seeing and crying so it's Neil's and ragus car which got crash and both died on the spot and that's there spirit they cry seeing there body but thinks at least in the heaven they r together and holds each other's hands and goes in the thin air.......

The end

This is my first ever spirits point of view story hope u all liked it it's specially made for the birthday girl my lucky_lakshmi di so hope she liked it and ha happy birthday di our Mounika543 dis waste fellow.......