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Chapter 1: somebodys 16
Renesmees p.o.v
I opened my eyes and their they were my family and the wolf pack staring at me. "Happy birthday Nessie" my they all cheered. "Thanks", I said still half asleep.It took me a minute, but i finally sat up. How long have they been here watching me sleep. "Probably an hour", my dad said. "Dad", I said and he just laughed. I have to get ready. I wonder how bad I look. I slept hard. Dad laughed and finally said, " Every one she has to get ready go wait in the hall", wait i wont Alice to stay, i thought, " except for Alice". " Thanks dad I o you won". " Your welcome sweety", he glanced at Alice, " take it easy on her shes still a little girl no matter how old she is". "Dad", I blushed. " I will", Alice said and dad looked at me and gently kissed me on the cheek and walked out.
"So", Alice said, "lets go fix you up, we got a bunch of people waiting down there for you." We walked to my closet and their was a beautiful pink dress i had never seen before. I't looked like a cinderella dress. "Oh Alice" I said, " Its beautiful". " I new you would like it," she chirped.
After I got ready i decided it was time to look in the mirrow. I glanced and I couldn't beleive my eyes I didn't know that person in the mirrow, she was too pretty to be me, pretty, no beatiful. " so whatcha think", Alice chimed, " its wonderful i don't know who that person is".
As I walked down the stairs everybodys mouth fell opened especialy Jacob Black. Jacob Black was in love with my mom. When I was born...have you ever heard of imprinting well only werewolfs imprint and inprinting is like when you see him/her for the first time its not gravity keeping you to the planet its him/her.... well Jacob imprinted on me.
That moment felt weird, when i looked at jacob i had a weird feeling, I thank I love him. Jasper was smilling i think he felt what i felt and then nodded like he knew what i was thinking. i looked at my dad he looked mad.
Then i looked at every body else, Embry always had a thing for me he had a weired look on his face. All the girls looked like they were fixing to cry. My mom, she would probly be crying but vampires cant shead a tear. I walked down the rest of the stairs and my moom stud up. She walked over their and said " My little girls growing up". " Ohh mom," I looked at Jasper and mouthed the words help me. I think some people saw that because I saw smiles.Then Alice hugged me and then the wrest of the family and then the werewolf, when it was Embrys turn I swear Jake was bought to lose it. Then It was Jakes turn. " Hey Nessie you look beautiful," I blushed.
"Thanks" I chirped. Everyone was watching. Thenhe hugged me and I felt something and I didn't want to let go.
