Captured Eyes

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Hello everyone :)

Well I'm writing this piece of literature, and this is just the beginning  of it -- i started today December 30, becuause in reality a dream that i had last night motivated me to do so. Please Vote on it  if you like it , feel free to comment any suggestion or anything, comments will be appreaciated. There is more to come . Enjoy !

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Captured Eyes

Intro.

 

I was captured in a place of darkness where nothing could be seen.

“Where could I be? “ I asked myself.

Suddenly, I felt someone’s presence.

“Who is there?” I asked.

All of a sudden I saw myself struggling with a figure that was in front of me. I was captured, but captured in his eyes. It is something that I can’t even describe myself. It seemed as if I knew the person, but who could it be? I screamed, taking everything out that I had in my throat, and he let me go. I ran as fast as I could until I saw the light. Miles away I felt safe, but my mind was still in those eyes. It is something that I still can't forget. Days later after that event, I had realized that my life had changed. I knew I had to figure out who that person was.  

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 31, 2010 ⏰

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