My Dream Girl

Hunter's POV

I walked down the long dark hallway of what looks like a haunted house that you would find at a fair. I could see not-so-scary clowns and magic mirrors all of the place.

Well, the clowns weren't scary to me anyway.

After what felt like forever but was only half an hour according to my almost flat phone that helped me to find a dark brown door at the end of the hall by using the flash light.

Opening the door I was blinded for a while from the bright white light of day.

I found that I was at an actual fair grounds that I had been at when I was younger plus when I had a happy and fun life that was now drain of life from the people I love. Seeing this place made all the colour run from my face. This very place is a nightmare inside a nightmare.

I walked around only to see no one around buying food or even on the ride like the fairs wheel, 360 or the hangover, but all the animals like horses, cows, sheep and even fat disgusting rats from the events are all out walking and eating the show food that was now growing mould. That looked like it has been around for a week with no one around to clean up and take care of the animals. I went to the oval where the motorbike and ramps sat still with no one to drive or make a show.

I stand in the very middle just looking around in a whole 360 trying to find someone to help explain why I'm here.

On the last spin I saw a shadowed figure walking towards me. I could tell that the figure was female by the way she walked and of what she was wearing.

When she was only about 5 metres away. That's when I took her all in I saw bright electric blue eyes looking into my normal grass green ones. She had what looked like black hair from afar but was really was a dark chestnut brown hair. She was well built you can see she works out by the small show of perfect out line of muscle.

I could see that she wore a short black laced dress that just ends mid-thigh. She looked like she was going to a funeral, she was wearing black army boots that had spikes on the sides and a light blue chocker that was clearly lace.

She even wore glasses like the 3D glasses you get from the movies but clear.

She was beautiful. Both nerdy and sexy. I don't know who could pull that both off like she did right now.

In the heart of the dark night I could hear only my heart beat with the lights of the oval all shining on me and the mystery girl who is only now standing toes to toes with me.

That's when I heard the loudest noise

A bullet shell lands on the floor at my feet just in front of me.

I looked down to see my shirt's turning red, what the hell. Looking up to the young women's eyes I saw an emotion that I just can't pin point. I could see a 92 FS Inox gun in her hand pointing at me still with heat smoke rising to the top from the shot it hunt to know that she shot me, the young pretty girl. The world around me starts spinning making everything a blur.

I put my hand on my chest just at my heart and looked to see if it was true. Was this young women standing in front of me a murder and did she just shoot me and in the heart too. The one thing I would give to someone I love with my life. I removed my hand to see blood smeared on my palm.

I felt a hand on the back of my neck that pulled me closer that very movement sents shocks down my spine. I also felt lips on my neck that belonged to the beautiful women. I could hear her sweet and sexy tone of her voice in my ear as she said 'I missed you, and I want you, you need to find me please help me, I need you to save me' she almost yelled

I could feel myself getting weak at the knees both from her sweet intoxicating perfume and the fact I'm losing blood from the bullet hole that goings straight through my heart. Why am I still alive I should be dead that's what happens in movies they die straight away when being shot in the heart.

Looking back up to the perfect girl in front of me only to see her back as she slowly walked away from the cold dying man that was once me. I fell to the floor with a thump. My world turning black. The last thing I saw was a small skull tattoo on the young women's shoulder blade as I slipped into darkness.

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I wrote this in the back room of my aunties because I got angry because my aunty and sisters were all on playing on their phones, laptop, xboxes ect. They were too busy to even talk so I got pissed and went to hide and wrote so I'm sorry if it's bad

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