THE OCEAN PEARL AWARDS (EDITION 1)

RESULT - POETRY (PARTICIPANTS)

Hello lovely writers❤

Poetry is judged bowdownpeasantz, Kailucy, -Navyah- and Savannah_Rose101 The judges have done a great job by pointing out the weak points and strong points. So, take the review positively/constructively to make your book better. If you have any doubts about the result feel free to PM the judges but with politeness.

Here is the result for all the participants. Don't feel demotivated but with this result try to fill all the loop holes of your story

1. Book Name: Heart murmurs

Author Name: shining_pearl_

Judge Name: Savannah_Rose101

Criteria 1) Book cover and title: = (8/10)

Criteria 2) originality = (8/10)

Criteria 3) Language = (10/10)

Criteria 4) poetic techniques = (10/10) 

Criteria 5) style = (10/10)

Criteria 6) Basic Grammar, Vocabulary, and Spelling = (7/10)

Overall: 53/60

Review: It wasn't as original as it could have been, it was like some parts flowed and others were stiff, like they weren't meant to be there. The vocabulary wasn't very advanced or higher level at all, but overall still a good book of poems!

2. Book name : Zenith

Author name : @Zarin_21

Judge name: bowdownpeasantz

Criteria 1) Book Cover and Title = (8/10)

Criteria 2) Originality = (9/10)

Criteria 3) Language = (8/10)

Criteria 4) Poetic techniques = (9/10)

Criteria 5) Style = (10/10)

Criteria 6) Basic Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation = (9/10)

Overall: 53/60

Review: The author's poems and themes were relatable. She was effective in evoking the emotions of the reader through her vivid writing style and choice of words. She used simple words, yet they carried deep meanings. Great work!

3. Book name: succulent drops

Author name: stbunnicula

Judge name: Kailucy

Criteria 1) Book cover and title: 8/10