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Echo and her family move away from California to a place by a forest. She is in high school because middle school just didn't feel right. I made her smart and stuff so that her brother could protect her?

Her little sister is kidnapped and killed, the strain on the family is too high and the metaphorical rope snaps. Parents get divorced and brother dies (I had to get rid of him and make an excuse for Echo to get rid of her mom).

Echo kills her mom and is taken to Slender Mansion by Jeff

Her room is awesome

She meets all the Pastas and they become her new family, her big brothers, and sisters.

Jeff is the best big brother anyone could ask for, he protects her, supports her, and cares for her.

On Halloween, she goes trick or treating and a group of jerks pours bleach on her and sets her on fire (wow so original)

This somehow turns her hair white and her eyes purple, she is blind for a while but gets her sight back (I don't remember how that was supposed to happen)

^^This explains the half and half hair/eyes on the cover^^

She meets a boy and falls in love

The boy is Zalgo's son and he is sweet and kind

Jeff obviously threatens the boy but deems him worthy of his 'little sister'

The boy proposes to Echo and they have a beautiful wedding

They have kids and eventually grandkids and grow old together

Echo dies before her husband, it's peaceful, in her sleep. Her last sunset was spent with her beloved as they sat in their rocking chairs on their porch. Their house was cute and had a white picket fence before a stretch of beach so it made for amazing sunsets.

She is buried in the middle of the forest in a golden coffin lined with white roses. She wears a red lace dress and holds a single black rose.

She comes back as an angel with black wings and stays with her husband until his time has come.

He dies a year after she did and is buried next to her.

Their headstones are two statues, one a kind girl, the other, a loving boy, they are holding hands. They hold hands for all of eternity in the forest and get to see all of the generations of their family until they forget about their predecessors. 50 years after the last of their family sees them fro the last time, a man with leathery white skin and no eyelids shows up walking slowly. He is dressed in a red suit with a white silk tie and is holding the hand of a young girl. He kneels at the grave and places a single black rose on Echo's grave. He smiles sadly, "Hey Echo...I have someone I'd like you to meet," he gestures for the little girl to kneel next to him, she has blonde hair and blue eyes and a hoodie that is way too big on her right now, It's black with blue flames, "Echo, meet my daughter, I hope you don't mind that I named her Echo. I miss you little sister, I wish I could see you again but even if I was able to die, we wouldn't end up in the same place."

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