OC Review[DISCONTINUED]

1 - Braxton[Steampunk OC]

This OC was submitted by @awkward_reindeer . To make it easier, I'll be putting the oc bio in normal text and my feedback/reaction in bold.

fandom: None (it's set in a steampunk world inspired by 1850 and i guess set in 1850? sorry if this is vague i'm still trying to work out the rules of my world.)                                                                                                  That's okay! It's usually easier to start off with a general idea of the world and then slowly develop it over time, so you're fine!

birth name: Sadie Braxton (hates first name with a passion)

preferred name: Braxton

nickname(s): shortie (a nickname given to him by Blair), goblin man (another one by Blair), the-feral-creature-that-lives-in-our-shed (Blair yet again)

age: 16

species: human

Gender (ftm): they\them, he\him                                                                          Oh, a trans character? Very interesting!

sexuality: asexual/panromatic

Nationality: (I haven't decided)

ethnicity: probably British?

appearance: pretty short (5'0), a mop of tangled short (usually greasy) auburn curly hair, freckles all over face and shoulders, hazel eyes, dark puffy rings around eyes from lack of sleep, 46kg (which is about the average for his height), round glasses, triangle face type, fairly small build, sometimes gets acne on his face, usually wears a victorian style lab coat or a grey waistcoat and black pants.                                                 Your description was done very well, I was able to picture your character in my mind easily! And I love the simplicity of the clothes, but that's just personal preference!

Personality: This boy is almost always paranoid about something, he is usually very cautious around new people and will often be suspicious of their 'true intentions'. Although his paranoia gets noticeably a lot worse when he doesn't get enough sleep. He is weirdly decisive and specific and if he gets an idea in his head he will almost always do it. He is ambitious, almost to an unhealthy degree and will lock himself in his lab and deprive himself of self care until he gets the answer he wants. He adores science (especially chemistry and biology) and 'seeing how things tick'. However he's not very good at understanding other people's emotions but he is getting better at it. He is generally a very curious person and will ask a lot of questions. He is also quite selfish and usually only has his best interests in mind, if there was a fire for example he would just flee without even giving the other people in the building a second thought. He is usually quiet and serious and his sense of humor is tinged with a fair bit of satire. Even though he likes to think of himself as logical he can often have a hard time regulating his own emotions. He is very aware of this and often tries to hide them or block them out. This can sometimes lead to emotional outbursts and sort-of-kind of tantrum/meltdown type things (idk it's late and i'm tired). He can be a bit bratty and a little childish at times such as if he messes up he'll immediately pin the blame on someone else. If he doesn't like you he will make it known through passive aggressive comments and indirectly insulting you. He is screechy and tiny bit neurotic, although most of the screechy and neuroticism can probably be blamed on his lack of sleep. He likes his space and doesn't like crowds since he finds them dirty and claustrophobic. He is a little prideful and has a distaste for asking for help.                                                                                                                                        A character with noticeable flaws that is still very likable, perfect!