Hi, here are the results after almost 2 days of judging. To be honest, nahirapan kami sa sa pagge-grade dahil ang daming magagandang entries. We'll also include our overall comments on your story, no hard feelings po sana but we're just being honest and we're not proffesional po.
Just wanna say thanks for joining and congrats po sa lahat! Keep on writing!
Criteria:
Content: 45
Writing Authencity: 25
Lesson: 15
Grammar Structure: 15
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Pirma by: Nh_Pzkznkzmtzm
Content: 40
Writing Authencity: 25
Lesson: 10
Grammar Structure: 13
Total: 88/100
Judge One's Comment: The content's nice, about fangirling. Maraming makakarelate. Kaso, yung sa last part, nakakabitin, kasi maraming unanswered questions. Like, ano yung sumikat na post, ano'ng nangyari doon sa part na kakausapin ng idol niya si Dyoysi. So, maraming readers ang mabibitin. Writing authencity is 25, perfect score. Kasi wala pa naman akong nababasang ganoong story. Lesson, honestly, wala akong nakitang main lesson doon. Ayon din kasi yung isa sa mga mahahalagang bagay when making a story. Kasi para rin 'yon sa readers. Grammar structure, maraming informal words like 'pan' 'pramis' and meron pang iba. Ang informal kasi ng ganoon. Pero, it's up to you naman kung gagawin mong formal or informal. But I suggest na formal nalang. Marami ring punctuations na nakakalimutan and hindi naman maiiwasan iyon. Keep on writing!
That Should Be Me by: keimeedixsss
Content: 38
Writing Authenticity: 20
Lesson: 13
Grammar Structure: 12
Total: 83/100
Judge One's Comment: The content's medyo cliche. For me. Kasi, cliche na talaga yung mga storyang sa bestfriend mo napupunta yung boyfriend mo, something like that. Writing authenticity, like I said cliche na ang mga ganoong storya. Lesson is parang acceptance gano'n and that's nice. Grammar structure, maraming informal words and yung ibang punctuation nasosobrahan sa gamit. Keep on writing!
You and Me and The Karaoke by: Alegny
Content: 45
Writing Authenticity: 25
Lesson: 15
Grammar Structure: 13
Total: 98/100
Judge One's Comment:
The content's very unique. Honestly, I thought it's a love story, but hindi pala. Writing Authenticity, like I said the content's unique. Lesson is, correct me if I'm wrong, huwag susuko dahil laging may chance pa. Which is super nakakatulong sa mga readers. Grammar structure, super unti lang naman ng mga wrong punctuations at hindi naman maiiwasan iyon. Overall, your story's beautiful. Keep it up!
One Shot Stories | 03: I'm Not Her by: Jessicalangpo
Content: 40
Writing Authenticity: 24
Lesson: 14
Grammar Structure: 13
Total: 91/100
Judge One's Comment:
The content's good. Kaso may mga parts na hindi inexplain ng maayos. Maikli lang siya. Okay lang naman iyon. But, kailangan talaga iexplain ng maayos. Honestly, nung unang basa ko, hindi ko masyadong maintindihan. Then I read it again. Doon ko na nagets. I actually love the story. But, gaya nga ng sabi ko, may mga parts na hindi naexplain ng maayos. So, yung ibang readers, hindi maiintindihan. Writing authenticity, we don't have a problem with that. Lesson, I guess, acceptance. Correct me if I'm wrong and maganda yung lesson na yun for the readers. Grammar structure, may mga wrong punctuations, but hindi naman maiiwasan iyon. Keep on writing!
Between The Lines by: persephone_sparks
Writing Authenticity: 24
Lesson: 14
Grammar Structures: 13
Total: 96/100
