Make Me Sir

Chapter 1

Feeling an ice cold sensation all over my body causing me to jolt up from my sleep screaming, only to see my so called mother with a now empty bucket looking at me with such hate and disgust "get the fuck up you disgusting lazy bitch go take care of your fucking sister" she yelled at me from the floor where my dirty mattress is.
Hearing Aella crying I quickly rushed to the other side of the room to pick her up, I cradled her until she became quiet, finally resting her back down to head to the bathroom.
"Oh shit" I forgot to introduce myself well my name's Alora and once upon a time we were the most kindest and richest family that lives in a mansion..................................

"Sike bitch" my father is a pimp that slept with my whore mother resulting in me and Aella, guess what they kept us as punching bags but since Aella is too young I take her share as well........

Back to the present

I went into the bathroom to freshen up but I stopped dead in my tracks when I saw myself in the mirror my beautiful black hair is a dry mess caked up with dirt and my own blood from last nights double beating, two black eyes busted lip caked up blood on my face and my extremely thin body as I'm analyzing myself I realized that I have to find a way for them to kick me out.....
"Bitch!!!! Don't you know that we're hungry you worthless skinny piece of shit HURRY UP!!!!" I decided to obey to avoid the extra beating I was still going to get if he's drunk. I rushed out the bathroom picked up my sleeping sister and secured her on my back with her baby carrier.
Sighing a breath of relief when I made it to the kitchen and began preparing breakfast and some formula after for aelly, setting up the table my body came in contact with my sperm donor
A sense of dread washed over me, closing my eyes and waiting for the slap or punch to reach my face I was met with total silence...............
Opening my eyes to see my father with a almost demonic smirk on his face he said
"Put down the food my baby lori" I did what he said and my body was rewarded with a slap to the face but I stood my ground cause I couldn't afford to hurt or wake up aelly.
Few minutes passed with him doing what he wanted to his favorite punching bag and I stood up and allowed him when he was finally done he grabbed his food and I heard him say while walking out the kitchen
"Stupid worthless whore like her mother"
"The fucking mistakes I make"  I couldn't fight back or say anything so I remained silent.
For the rest of the day I did chores, feed and play with aelly and make dinner.

Halle fucking lujah!!!!

I was saved from the beating I had tonight.

I stayed in my room the rest of the night venturing off to an almost blissful sleep.

Just wanted to know how my first chapter sounded to you and if there is anything else you see that can be done.
Bye baddies 😁😊