I like it.
It starts out with raw sarcasm and humor, which keeps the reader hooked. Though the bad boy/Jerk might be cliched, you made up for it using impeccable grammar, spelling, and sentence structure.
I have no negative remarks for the story, but a piece of advice for the future chapters, try to make them the least cliched possible. Because a lot of stories revolve around jerks and bad boys, try to make this one as distinct as you can from the others.
You write in a funny and humorous way, Keep it up ^^
Keep Writing! (;
