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Chapter 3
After leaving key's house I head back to my house. It wasn't a long walk at all, I felt someone's presence behind me and when I look back I saw no one was there. I got a bad feel so I started to run, then I ran into someone. It was minho, when I saw him I hugged him because I was scared. He hugged me back. Then he made me face so that he can ask what is wrong.
Minho: what's wrong?
Taemin: s-someone w-was following m-me. I was scared and I ran. *crying*
Minho: want to come to my house for the night.
Taemin: i-is that ok-okay?
Minho: yes, that way I will be able to protect you.
We walk to Minho's house. Then he walked me to his room. He laid me down in his bed and I fall asleep.
P.O.V minho
When I saw taemin running towards me I knew something was wrong. I ask him what was wrong and he said someone was following him. Then I thought "they found what am I going to do now." I knew what I had to I had to call him. I pull out my phone and called onew.
Onew: hello. What happened?
Minho: they caught on, they been following taemin. I think they know who he is.
Onew: we can only do one thing now.
Minho: okay I know.
I hang up the phone. I knew this had to happen but why so soon. I didn’t even know what he is. If his parents were still here he wouldn’t have to deal with this. He doesn’t deserve what will happen to him from now on, but it has to happen. It's for his own safety. I wake him up because I want to tell him before it happens.
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Eternity
Fanfictioni live by myself my parents died when i was little. one night i found a stranger in my room he left me terrified, and the next day there was a new student his name was minho for some reason he was interested in me, but i don't know why.
