Next day in the kitchen
Neil: Are you out of your mind? Pehli baar cooking seekh rahi ho aur pakode? Seriously. Tumhe kuch idea bhi hai?
Mini: Pehle baad se kya fark padta hai?
Neil: Bahot fark padta hai. But now that you have made up your mind, and ziddi toh tum ho hi. Let's start.
They started with the recipe and, as expected, there was a complete mess in the kitchen.
Neil: Oh my God. What are you doing? Thoda dhyan se karo. Arrey itni dur se nahi karte. Paas jao. Wait wait (turned off the gas) listen, I can't. You.. cooking, this is impossible.. let's go outside.(He dragged her outside the kitchen and made her sit on the chair) Dekho tum yahan baith ke sirf taste karo.
Mini: Arrey aise kaise? Thodi si bhi patience nahi hai tumhare paas. Itna bhi tolerate nahi kar sakte mujhe?
He stopped and turned to look into her eyes.
Deen deyange, imaan deyange
Vaar tere utto jahan deyange
Duniya ne tennu, kujh vi nahi dena
Asi tennu apni jaan deyange
Neil (Came closer to her; huskily): Tolerate? Mai tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon, Mini, kuch bhi. Aur agar aisa hai toh mai tumhe zindagi bhar tolerate kar sakta hoon.
Mini: Mai nahi manti. Tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai.
She stood up to go, but Neil held her hand and pulled her towards him. She fall in his arms.
Neil: Sirf mere hi bas ki baat hai.
Subah tere paira ch,
Shaam tere paira ch,
Raat tere paira ch, Katt deni mai,
Aadat buri jo vi lagi ae jaani nu
Sau lage teri chhad deni mai
Jo jo bole tu bayaan deyange
Chaleya je vass aasmaan deyange,
Duniya ne tennu..
He made her sit on the chair, rested her feet on the table and himself sat on the floor while touching her feet lightly (his foot fetish).
Neil: Tumhe tolerate karna aur kisi ke bas mein nahi hai.
Mini: Tumne hi toh abhi kaha tha that you can't. How can I trust this fact?
Neil: Jaise tumne kaha tha, aazma ke dekhlo.
She could see the honesty and genuineness in his eyes.
Tere utte marde haan,
Pyaar tennu karde haan,
Tere kolo darr de haan yaar mere
Mai chhadeya je tennu,
Khuda kare mennu,
Khuda kare tukde hazar mere
Haye buri teri shayri sunaan deyange
Besura je gaawe te gaan deyange
Duniya ne tennu..
Mini: Aur agar kabhi, tumhara patience khatam ho gaya toh? What if you feel someday that you can't? You will go..
Neil: Never. If I go, I will lose myself. Mai jee hi nahi paunga.
Mini: Why?
He didn't say anything but this time Mini knew what he felt for her. She smiled whole heartedly. Neil was a bit confused at her reaction. He couldn't see the disappointment in her eyes like everytime when he refrained from confessing his love to her.
Neil: So, agar tum aise cooking seekhne wali ho toh I am sorry to say, tumhe kuch nahi aane wala.
Mini:🤨
Neil: Meri student ho naa, curriculum mai set karunga. Sabse pehle, roti(chapati) se start karenge.
Mini: Alright 😊
After some time, they got ready to meet Keya. Neil was again very nervous and disappointed. Mini assured him with her eyes. They reached Isha's house. As they went inside, they saw Ritwik was already there.
Ritwik: Hi Neil, woh actually Keya se milne aaya tha. Tum yahan?
He didn't say anything. Mini went to Keya.
Mini: Hi Keya. How are you?
Keya: Good.😊
Mini: Aaj mai aur Neil.. your dad, aapko ek nayi jagah leke jayenge. A change. Are you ready?
Keya: Okay.
Isha scowled at Mini. They left with Keya. All through the journey, they talked a lot and Keya also mixed up with them completely. After reaching Patiala...
Rani opened the door.
Mini: Look Keya. This is the house, jahan par hum bahot enjoy karne wale hain. But before that, I want you to meet someone.
Keya: Who?
Neil: Your friend. A new friend.
Keya: Kahan hai woh?
Neil looked at Mini. But before she could say anything, Arya herself came running and hugged Mini.
Arya: Tum aa gayi Veer Balika. Maine tumhe bahot miss kiya aaj.
Mini: Same here chhutanki. But see, tumse milne kaun aaya hai.
Arya looked at Keya. She was hiding behind Neil.
Arya: Neil ke piche mat chhupo. Bahar aao. 😊
She came to her. They shook hands.
Arya: Hi. I am Arya.
Keya: Hello. Keya.
Arya: Veer Balika, mai isko apne room mein le jaun?
Mini nodded and they left.
Neil: Mini, sab thik hoga naa? Woh dono hi bache hain. Insecurities, ladayi, jhagre.. it all may lead to hatred, jo ki dono ke liye thik nahi.
Mini: I understand Neil. But yeh baat iss case mein apply nahi hoti.
Neil: Matlab?
Mini: Matlab agar Arya ki jagah koi aur hota toh shayad mai bhi yehi kehti. See, I don't know much about Keya. But Arya, she is just like me, way mature than her age. Pura matter samajh gayi woh sirf ek baar samjhane mein. Meri chhutanki ko mai ache se janti hoon. Sab theek hoga.
Do you think that there will be some problem between Arya and Keya? Do comment.
Happy reading. 💖
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FanfictionThe show has ended because of the channel's stupid decision. MiNeil's love story was incomplete so I decided to take it forward. It is continued from the scene from the restaurant where Mini and Neil walk away from Isha, holding hands. Those who are...
