dragon ball primal

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Author notes:this is the first story I've writen on here so unless you are giving advice or have questions keep any negative nonsense out of the comments

Goku and vegeta are training with broly on earth while the others are enjoying a nice meal when all of a sudden a mysterious figure emerges from the clouds. They look on in confusion as the figure slams into the ground sending worrying chills down everyone's spines. The z fighter along with broly fly over to the crash sight. They land and start looking for anyone left in the crater. After a few minutes goku calls everyone over because he found someone in the rubble. It was a saiyan teenager and looked as if he was in an intense battle. Vegeta tells broly to grab him and take him back to capsule Corp so he can heal. 

Kakarot go to korins and get a senzu bean now! Yelled vegeta.

After 5 or so minutes goku arrives to see the saiyan lying on a table in pain. He then gives him the senzu bean as his muscles then loosen up and he relaxes. After about an hour the saiyan wakes up confused and angry. Where the hell am I he asked as goku appears next to him.

 You are on earth. Are you a saiyan?

 Yeah why? 

Well i am too, along with a few of my friends.

 Bullshit the rest of the saiyans were exterminated by the demon race!

I have no clue who you are talking about but there are no demons here, our home planet was destroyed by frieza.

Who the hell is frieza. Never mind that, why did you save me. Why wouldn't we save you you were injured. Bullshit you just want something from me but too late i have nothing left no money no family and no friends.

Quit your sob story. Oh vegeta when did you get here. I have been here the whole time just shut up and let him answer. I am very sorry umm what's your name. In my world i am known as the crimson shadow but my real name is cole and I'm a saiyan. 

Well if you are a saiyan prove it by a test of strength. Who better to test you than the prince of saiyans

I guess since i have nothing better to do come at me then. Hey aren't you going to transform or are you just going to stand there. I will transform when needed. You cocky son of a bitch, ugh fine then argghhh take this, vegeta throws a thunderous punch in coles direction but all he does is dodge without even opening his eyes. How the hell did he dodge that vegeta asked. Cole yawned in turn pissing off vegeta off beyond belief. So your bored huh let's kick it up a little bit, vegeta clenches his fist turning into a super saiyan lets try this on for size. He launches a barrage of energy blasts in coles direction but all he does is repel them all with the back of his hand. Vegeta enough of this childs play if you want a fight get serious because this is just boring. As cole said this vegeta snaps causing his power to surge and his hair and aura turn into a fiery reddish blaze that took cole off guard. Damn that's not what i expected. what kind of form is that. Oh this, haha, this is super saiyan god a form far above any level of a normal saiyan.

So what your hair changed color thats not that impressive. I beg to differ, this form is called super saiyan god and it will pound you into the ground.
Yeah right its not that impresi… ugh. Cole gets cut off as vegetas fist slams into his face followed by  a powerful shockwave. Cole gets sent flying into the wall of the training area and falls to the ground.

Cole struggles to his feet and laughs as he rubs his face where he was punched. I gotta admit that hurt but...*Wipes blood from corner of mouth* this is only getting started.

 Cole charges as his aura bursts and burns with power his hair turns gold then grows immensely until he achieves super saiyan 3.
 This can't be,he has no god ki but his power is immense.
 Lets see how you handle me when i start actually trying.
Cole leaps toward vegeta and lands a devastating gut punch on him. Vegeta is launched back by the impact but eventually catches himself. With a look of anger he wipes a streak of sweat from his brow and says that tears it i have had enough of you vegeta's hair slowly changes from the fierce crimson red to a brilliant blue color. The energy coming off the form produces a shockwave that almost knocks the air out of cole.

Really blue hair whats next purple this is ridicul… ugh cole gets cut off as vegeta's first hit lands on coles face once again followed by a barrage of punches and kicks devestating coles body reverting back to his base form. Ha is that it i was just getting warmed up.
 Damn this power is insane I've never fought anybody of this level before. Cole weakly stands back up with a smile on his face. Fine i guess this is your fault it has come to this. 
Cole lets out a vicious roar that rattled the z fighters to there cores. Cole then started to transform. His body begins buffing up, Red fur grew on his arms and his chest his hair grew but kept its blackish color and his power skyrocketed far beyond his super saiyan 3 power. Cole let out one final scream that sounded like that of a giant monster.
 What the hell is he vegeta stated as he put up his gaurd. As the smoke cleared cole emerged and said This is a super saiyan 4. Sorry it looks so different than the others, This is the pinnacle of a saiyans power the way it is supposed to be. No need to be so lazy and rely on the strength of the gods for power.

 Enough of you babbling and eat my fist. Vegeta bounds toward cole and so does he. There fists collide causing the ground to rip and rumble beneath them. They fly into the air punching and kicking at full force but always ending in an even clash they split clouds and cracked ground ripping their clothes in the heat of battle. I give you props vegeta nobody has made me go this far before. Enough talk i still have another form left. Wait what.

Vegeta falls back and channels his energy to the core of his body and in an instant his hair turned from its ocean blue color to a brilliant sapphire. A burst of energy came flowing out of vegetas body enough to make cole both anxious and excited. I guess you were holding back. Cole charges at vegeta but was too slow and got an elbow to his back then as cole hits the ground vegeta puts his foot on his back and pushes down. He then grabbed cole by the hair lifting him up. Is this all you got vegeta says as he punches cole in the stomach. Aaghh, vegeta throws Cole in the air and sticks his hand into the air and yells big bang attack! The blast hits cole and he hits the ground. Vegeta smirks and says was that to much for you to handle. cole then quietly starts to laugh and slowly it gets louder until it eventually turns into a full on holler. What the hell are you laughing at. Oh i am just happy i finally get to use my strongest form against a worthy opponent. Cole then clenches his fists and charges his energy until his hair and fur changed to a brilliant silver and his hair grew to the length of his super saiyan 3 form,While maintaining the super saiyan 4 appearance. What the hell kind of form is that. This is super saiyan 5 my ultimate form. Nothing can stand up against me now. Huh we'll see about that. Vegeta charges full speed at cole with a fierce punch to coles head. The punch lands with an enormous boom. Dust flies around clouding around the two fighters. When the dust settled vegeta's fist was still in contact with coles head but cole seemed to be unfazed by the colossal strike. Vegetas face filled with terror and anger as he realized how ineffective his strike really was.

Is that all you got? Cole asks as he grabs vegeta by the throat. Ugh damn you vegeta went for a punch but with the pain of his throat being squeezed it had even less of an effect. This fight is over, cole then slammed vegeta to the ground and let go of his throat. He then reached out his hand and said buster cannon. A powerful blast came erupting from his hand knocking vegeta back to his base form unconscious. The z fighters were astonished. They had no idea a saiyan with no god ki could beat one that did. 
Cole then reverted back to his base form and with a sigh he smiles and reaches out his hand out to help vegeta. Vegeta scoffs and smacks his hand away. Cole looks at vegeta with a disappointed face. 

I am heading off to train vegeta scoffs as he turns too leave. Sorry about that he usually is a sore loser so don't take it personally. Thanks what's your name. Oh sorry about my manners, my name is goku and this is our friend broly and my son gohan. Hey i was wondering are any of you stronger than that last guy. Well despite him thinking he is superior i have a form stronger than his and broly here is as strong as both of us put together plus some. Literally, it took vegeta and i to fuse just to take him down. Seriously what kind of form did he use? Oh surprisingly just plain super saiyan. 

WAIT WHAT! I didn't know someone like that existed. I want to fight him too. Not right now maybe later, First you tell us about where you are from. Fine. I am from earth in the year 8540 the year i am in with you is 2020.  I have only heard stories about you too in legends. Two saiyans each ascending beyond the gods. But i always thought it was just simple stories. I'll tell you more about myself later but first can i get something to eat I'm starving.

Author notes: this is my very first story here so keep anything negative to yourself

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 16, 2020 ⏰

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