Chapter 13 edited

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Hey guys! I'll be picking up the princess is evil for however long I hold up lmaoo. I've edited chapter 13 and I'll post chapter 14 in a day or two. I just need some feedback from you guys about the writing style and if there's anything you want me to change!
I'll give you guys a quick recap of the characters if you forgot bc i genuinely did.
Lynn- the maid

Cage- female knight guarding her(I think)

Leona- our female lead princess aka rabbit

Harriet- emperors aide

Ibec- kinda rude brother

Nikil- the sis con

Chapter 13:

WOOOSH

A wild wind filled the place.

The grass was scattered by the fire, where there were still embers left. The nasty smell sticks in the nose.

The shadows are fallen, and Ibec's flying far away.

This is because it was more powerful than a general fireball.

'It's a big deal.'

Leona wiped her cold sweaty hands on her skirt one after another.

Nevertheless, a cold sweat continued to flow.

My hands were hot.

I was thinking of using only the first circle magic, Fire Arrow.

Making a gap and let Nikil escape

'A fire ball.'

However, I used the 3rd Circle Magic, Fire Ball. Without even knowing it.

It was pure instinct.

The instinct to save Nikil.

'Why am I...'

Leona smiled and threw a sigh toward Nikil running to her.

No! If I made a gap, I would have killed Ibec. Why come running towards me?

I just don't understand.

"rabbit!"

Nikil laughed as he wiped the blood on his face one after another with his arms.

"You saved me!"

Nikil reached out to Leona, and quickly pulled away his arm to stop her from seeing his bloody arms. He laughs and bends his knees.

"Since when did you learn to use this type of magic? Why didn't you tell us? If you did, I would have found a good teacher! Are you a wizard then?"

In response to the endless flow ofquestions, Leona gulped.

What should I do in this case?

She lifted her eyes.

Ibec looked at me in the distance. And I felt the energy of Harriet, who was opening his mouth next to me, and the emperor's gaze.

...In this case.

"No. I don't know."

the best thing to do is act innocent!

Leona tried to put on a casual face.

"Just ignore it. I didn't mean to do it."

"liar!"

"It's so cool."

Nikil's eyes narrowed. They didn't believe Leona's words.

"How did you do that so well?"

"I don't know. It's just in your head."

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