My Friends and I were trick or treating when we knocked on the door of a large house. We heard soft footsteps approach the door , through the glass there stood a tall man with pale skin and hair as dark as night his face was handsome with a sensuous smile and sharp eyes that felt they could pierce my skin, his teeth straight and white, smiling he said" how may i help you,young ladies?"cocking his head as if we were prey and he was sizing us up.
"Trick or treat!"my best friend yelled holding her bag out for candy.
"arent you ladies a little old for that nonsense?" the stranger asked going on to say" im having a Halloween party why not come in and enjoy yourselves" casually motioning to the party inside.Hannah; my best friend, didn't think much of it, she noticed the chocolate fountain and group of costumes to the left of the hall," don't be scared, i wont bite" the stranger said with a wink.
My mom had said to be home at 11 pm and it was already 10:30, we didn't live in this neighborhood and I wasn't sure if i would have time to drag Hannah out of the party if we went inside, but i didn't have to decide as the next group of trick or tr-eaters came, then a thought popped into my head " being a teen is about breaking the rules" so we went back to that house with the handsome man.
When we knocked on the door again the man was wearing a fine black suit different then the ripped jeans and t shirt that he was wearing earlier, the man smiled that wondrous smile and said" welcome back i knew you couldn't resist" he was holding the door open like a gentle men.
me and Hannah went to get some punch to drink and when we were drinking the punch i got really dizzy so i sniffed the glass, it smelled like punch and tasted like punch but i was to tired to care and i blacked out.When i woke up i was chained to a wall in what looked to be a basement...I felt weak ,like id been drained of my energy or something equal, I looked over to my left and saw that handsome man red staining his lips;blood, it hit me then, he is a vampire!
the vampire grinned seeing that i was still alive and said with a roguish grin "you have two choices, you can join me and be my lover or be drained as those who have refused me"he leaned against the stone still that damn smile was breath taking.
I thought about if being his lover was worth it and i had my answer as i said"of course I will, I get to be young and bountiful forever." a vicious smile spread across the vampires face as he bite my neck and i felt everything change,but little did the monster know he had just made an enemy who was hungry for revenge, one that would end him and damn me forever.
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Vampireits a Halloween short story you have to read it to find out what its about , slightly dark with hints of suspenseful and a friend took a sentence start and took turns writing parts of the story for 5 min intervals and switched papers at the end of...