"Don't judge the book by its cover"
"The blurb doesn't matter it's only the inner part of the story"
~ common phrases most of us have maybe got in our mind.
And yet somehow before a reader adds a book to their library, its the cover, title and blu...
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Title Your title is really nice. A mixture of two languages makes it so often heard still so unique. As a viewer, I only do know that the story happens around marriage but I can't really find out what the story is about. To know more I will have to read the blurb at least. Just I would advise you to think whether the "The" is that important or you don't want to simply keep it as "Wedding Hungama".
Cover I really love the yellow contrast in your picture which reminds me of Haldi and Mehndi. You have the main lead's picture in the front and a couple's picture as well. The "wedding" looks super cute and kind of childish with the "W" but I like that. "Hungama" could probably fit more with the yellow theme of your cover. Other than the positive things, I need to mention two things which I didn't like much. Firstly, the "g" of "Hungama" touches the bottom side of the cover and your name is quite close to the border as well. Secondly, the two names on top are a bit disturbing. Is this story written by three people or are they the cover designers? Maybe that could be changed up.
Blurb Your blurb is not too long and not too short. It says all the important things about the female lead in the story but there's no information about who the boy is. There's no introduction about him. The (!!??) at the beginning of the third paragraph aren't that needed to keep them there. I liked your second last paragraph but I think that there could be some more hooking questions for the reader to not swipe the book. That could maybe lead to getting a reader to open your book definitely.
Overall expression I think there are small things to change but overall it seems really amazing to read. There could be maybe a little bit of information about the male protagonist as well and the small changes mentioned above. Other than that after the interesting blurb I would love to see inside of your story.
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