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Title: Majestic: Unfolding Enigma
Author: AwierDamsel Genre: General Fiction No of story parts: 26 Status: Ongoing
Rating: ◊ ◊ ◊ ◊
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Title
Nice Title! It sounds classy, and at the same time mysterious. However, I'm not quite sure with the "Unfolding Enigma" part. It would be better if you say "Unfolding the Enigma", "An Unfolding Enigma" or "The Unfolding of an Enigma".
"Unfolding Enigma" simply means "Solving Mystery"—which is kulang. There should be something to connect those two words. You can use "the" or "an".
"Unfolding the Enigma" means solving THE mystery (a specific mystery).
"Unfolding an Enigma" means solving A mystery (could be any mystery).
"An Unfolding Enigma" kinda means "A mystery uncovering itself" (correct me if I'm wrong). So like nare-reveal 'yung mystery by itself. But if you use this, it will seem like "Majestic" is the mystery solving itself here—which I assume isn't, based on your plot.
"The Unfolding of an Enigma" means "The uncovering of a mystery". Parang pinapahiwatig nito na ipapakita ang pag-solve ng isang naturang misteryo na mahahanap sa libro mo (correct me again if I'm wrong).
I personally suggest "Majestic: Unfolding the Enigma" or "Majestic: The Unfolding of an Enigma".
This is all based on my research and interpretation of your book. Hope you consider this. (^^;)
Book Cover
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I like the cover. It looks sophisticated and alluring. However, nasaan 'yung "Unfolding Enigma"? Since it's part of the title, I think you should add it to your cover as well. You can put it below the word Majestic. Medyo i-angat mo lang ng konti 'yong Majestic para hindi masyadong crowded tingnan sa baba. Maybe you could make the font size a bit bigger, too.
