Before anything else, I would just like to remind everyone again that I'm no professional critic. Everything you will be reading from this point onward is based on my own opinions and acquired knowledge in this field. Also, I hope we can still be friends after this. Trabaho lang po. Char ('∀｀）
Title: Famous for Nothing Author: guardianlovers Genre: Teen Fiction No. of story parts: 33 Status: Ongoing
Rating: ◊ ◊ ◊ ◊
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Title
Interesting title! Parang may kuwento ka nang ibinibigay kahit title pa lang. Nakaka-curious siya, lalo na dahil umaakma siya sa cover :>
Book Cover
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I like your cover! Ito 'yung usong book covers noon. Hindi na gaanong patok ang ganitong style ng covers ngayon, pero I really like it. Maganda 'yung illustration at nagko-compliment sila no'ng title. Para na siyang cover ng isang published book. Nagustuhan ko rin kung paano na-highlight si ate girl na nasa-audience. Mas binigyan niya ng feels 'yung cover. I also like the font! I just think it would be better kung medyo nilakihan pa 'yung size no'ng title. I find it too small.
Synopsis
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Your synopsis is good. Not too long, but not too short. Just enough. It already has everything needed to make the readers curious and make them want more. Maganda at sakto na siya para sa akin. Good job!
'Yung mga in-underline kong salita ay 'yung mga kailangang palitan. "His music awakes her soul to realize..." could be changed into "His music awakens her soul and makes her realize how wonderful life can still be"or simply just "His music awakens her soul."
