Naruto Magazine: Issue #8

웃Advice웃

Hello readers at Naruto Magazine! It is I the great all powerful Kan-(smack! Stop being vain and get on with it.)(coughs and grins awkwardly!) Anyways guys it is I KanyaLang here with the next advice for you fellow Narutards.

QUESTION: Hey KanyaLang I love Naruto fanfictions and I find the best ones are about forbidden love, like student-teacher ones. I plan to write one, but I would like a few tips before hand. Do you have any I can use?

ANSWER BELOW

Ah, who does not love those juicy forbidden Naruto fanfictions? I know in my opinion I love them. First thing first I should note that it is quite difficult but not impossible to write a fanfic about student teacher love. I will make an example up right now for you to follow along and hope it works out for you in the end.

Step one: The first step is choosing who your character will fall in love with. It is important to figure out long before you create your character who he or she will fall for. Doing this will allow you to build and base your character and his or her characteristics and background. This in a sense allows you to be able to let their relationship flow naturally. While in step one it is also good to chose a rival of sorts that would build friction and trials against the two. For this example I am going to make my oc a girl and the person she is going to fall in love with is Kakashi.(Cause Kakashi is hot, awesome, amazing, drool worth- smack! Kanya stop fangirling!) (I find that Kakashi is pretty popular being used for these type of stories as well.) I have decided that the rival to cause trouble shall be Sasuke-teme.

Step Two: Now in step two this is where you will build your character. The first thing your character needs is obviously a name. So my oc name is going to be Amaterasu Uchiha. Yay our character now has a name! Now that our dear little Amaterasu has a name she needs an age, and with an age comes a birthday. Now please note that a lot of people keep with the twelve or thirteen age for their oc and I say this.... IT IS BAD! VERY BAD TO DO THAT! If you remember most of the sensei's in the Naruto world are in their LATE twenties. I think the closest age requirement for a sensei who is in their twenties and keeping the character that age are like Itachi or Deidara. So I personally suggest upping the age a bit so our beloved awesome sensei's don't go to prison for being a pedophile. I have decided to make Amaterasu be sixteen and her birthday on May fourth. This will make Amaterasu at least four or five years older then the rest of Konoha 11 and eleven years younger then Kakashi. Now we build her likes, dislikes, hobbies, abilities, and habits. I will only name a few so you get the general idea. Likes are visiting the K.I.A. stone, training, reading, and helping others. Dislikes, salty foods, people being late, and loud noises. Hobbies, reading, training, and collecting flowers. Habits, very blunt, when nervous nibbles on hair, refuses to cry, gambles, drinks away problems. Abilities, sharingan, summoning jutsu of wolves, shadow clones, earth is her main chakra, great healing, massive strength.

Step 3: Now that step two is out of the way we can move on to step three with Amaterasu. Now step three is about building a background. Now that Amaterasu in a sense a near solid character we need a background or story that provides use and to why Amaterasu is well Amaterasu. Now I have decided that at a young age Amaterasu was made an Orphan from the Uchiha clan. Her parents were killed on a mission. I am going to make her half Uchiha. Her father was a Uchiha but her mother was a Uzumaki. Because she was not a full Uchiha she was shunned by her clan and not treated well which resulted in her having hate for her clan and for her self for being part of the clan. I am also going to make it where she knew and was cared for by Kushina Uzumaki and learned from her mother's clan from her. Because of Kushina she knows who Naruto's parents are. She also will have a goal and a promise which is to protect Kushina-sensei's only son. I am going to make it where after Naruto is born and she vows to a dying Kushina, she leaves with Tsuande Senju to train and become stronger. Amaterasu then finally returns to complete her goal and is place on team seven since she never ranked up from Genin. Sasuke finding out she is a Uchiha is trying to force her to become his wife and help him restore their clan. I am also going to make Amaterasu live with Gai just for the hell of it.

Step 4 Now that we have Amaterasu fully developed as an oc we can now describe how she shall look in the books. I am going to make her have the Uchiha pale skin and Onyx eyes. She also will have a very petite yet build body with feminine assets very well shown. Her hair will reach down to her butt in a long braid but with her long bangs ruffled over towards the left side. Her hair color will be red with black natural highlights. I will make her around five feet and six inches tall. I will make Amaterasu wear a purple styled fighting kimono top with a black knee length skirt and black thigh shorts underneath it. She also will wear black knee length heeled sandals.(like Sakura's from Shippuden)over how outfit she will wear a loose long fighting robe that has the Uzumaki clan symbol on the back of it. Last shall be a single silver necklace of an Uchiha and Uzumaki symbol twisted and connected together that was given to her by her parents on her birthday.

Step 5 Now our final step is making a great description to catch readers attention with a cover to match with a title. Now if you don't know how to make a cover I suggest you find some one who can. (I make my own covers. I am also sure you can ask one of our Naruto Magazine workers for tips or help.) Now if I was going to make a cover I make it where it showed a girl facing away and into the shadows and looking towards the shadows would be a picture of Kakashi. The final thing I would put is my name KanyaLang and the title which shall be Bitten From The Forbidden Fruit. Now after your cover is made you finally make the description. Remember you want the description to be eye capturing yet not give to much away. Like so...

To most people the last of the Uchiha's are Sasuke Uchiha and his s-rank criminal older brother Itachi Uchiha. However they are completely and utterly wrong. Twelve years ago on the night of the Kyuubi attack a young girl made a vow and a promise to protect a certain knucklehead ninja we know today. Her name was Amaterasu Uchiha and much like Naruto she was a Orphan hated and abused. Coming back to the village years later she plans to make use of her vow long ago spoken and joins Team Seven where she catches the eye of a certain scarecrow.

There was a reason why God never wanted Adam and Eve to take a bite from the forbidden fruit... remember that.

So there you go my fellow readers! I hope my advice helps you make a kick-butt story. Make sure when you write it or any other Naruto story you stop by my page and drop a link.

Also please note if you decided to take my example from here and use it please give the credit where it is do.

Have an awesome supercalifragilisticexpialidocious day!

KanyaLang out!