R: Mister Iceberg is Mine

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R stand for Review.

"Hope you can stay with me forever"

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Genre: Action
Status: On Going

Rating keseluruhan: /5
Reader attract: 4/5

Siapa pernah baca nrflwr, fatiha huda then you will get the vibes...

Masuk 2020, dah kureng dengan genre camni.

Macam dulu lah, suka makan happy meal sebab dapat mainan. Now, masa uni beli happy meal sebab murah + dapat mainan. 2 in 1.

Typical story action, modern cinderella. Tanpa dia tahu, ada mata-mata yang akan report dekat Tuan.

Start dengan lari dari rumah dengan pertolongan kawan. Cuma distracted part dialog.

Contoh:
"Dah lama kita tak jumpa kan?" Bella bertanya.

Ayat ini telah dibetulkan.

Dan ayat dialog dengan naratif tak boleh sambung. Tapi saya tak pro sangat, ikut atas publisher juga sooo sukatilah kita nak type macam mana huhu

Setiap penutup situation will close with banner. Pun agak distracted jugak tapi ok je kot. Rasa macan scene pendek sangat, em and used to disscuss: biasa setiap chapter 1K to 2K words.

Macam biasa, hero akan incik mafia will get what he wants — Helena kena kidnap.

Rising action start dekat sini. Lambat la jugak, sebab dah chapter 8. Still interesting story.

Helena dah jumpa dengan Tuan Edwin. Cuma dia tampar lah dah engko pergi kidnap dia. Since character heroin was created as fragile, jadi dia ikut je dengan telunjuk tuan.

Itu jelah kot. Tak nak komen banyak. Lagipun, cerita ni dapat banyak awards.

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