Chapter 1 The Awakening

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This is my first fan fiction and I hope you enjoy it I don't expect to get a lot of readers but please do comment any ideas of how I can improve this  or if  you liked it.Also chapter 2 still in the work but you can still read what I have wrote for chapter 2 so far.

The year is 4018,1000 years since the ring of all rings
was thrown into the smouldering pits of Mount Doom from whence it came.We come to a place in which many adventures have began in this place the one and only shire. Many hero's originate from this place but the hero in this story is called Ardo.

Ardo's story starts with a knock at the door. As you all may know hobbits love their food what ever it may be bacon, cheese or pork but their favourite time of the day is double breakfast and that's just what Ardo was eating. Crispy bacon with eggs and a cup of boiling hot tea to go with it. As the young hobbit picked up his fork and began to pick up some egg, there was a knock at his door.

In excitement, Ardo put down his fork got on his hairy, leathery hobbit feet and ran to the door. As you may already tell Ardo loved visitors who ever it may be a neighbour hobbit or a travelling friend but this time it was neither. He gently put his hand on the door nob and pulled it. To his shock a tall lean man with luxurious white robes and a white pointy hat stood in front of the small hobbit. "so can I come in?" the tall man said with a deep tone. "Wait are you?" the young hobbit asked. Without being able to finish the Man answered, "Gandalf, indeed I am." The. Hobbit stated "But I thought you went to the undying lands 1000 years ago How's it possible your still alive?" Gandalf started laughing and said " I know I'm old but you don't need to remind me. " Just before  another word could be said gandalf started talking about how he was still alive.

It was about 500.years ago I was nearing my end when I heard a calling from beyond the undying lands. An entity beyond my knowledge of knowing. This entity told me of how soon Sauron would aweken and form an army from the first age a sacred army of Balrogs to bring middle earth to its knees . These Balrogs each carried their own unique weapon of devastating power and the balrog with the battle axe ( the strongest weapon of them all) was non other than Gothmog the high captain of Angband and Balrogs.

Gothmog was the only thing to ever walk the middle earth to match in Sauron's power

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Gothmog was the only thing to ever walk the middle earth to match in Sauron's power. Like the other balrogs Gothmog carried a fiery devastating whip in which burned everything in its path and brought its enemies down to the underworld. Then there was the second strongest balrog Tar Goroth a General of the Balrogs in which fell in batlle during the first age. During the war on the ring a ranger called Talion fought Tar Goroth with the spirit Carnan and froze it in ice but that's a story for another time. Like most other balrogs tar Goroth wielded a flaming sword and whip. There can only be seven balrogs but many of their names where lost in war only the names of five balrogs can be made out or interpreted these names are Gothmog. Tar Goroth, Thraulach, Durins bane and finally Gashu. Since only these names can be remembered the other 3 balrogs had names made for them Gashkar, Oduin, Drakin these names were decided by the council of the elves. Most of these balrogs stand tall with raging flames for wings they are mostly shadow and fire. In the first age many balrogs fell in battle. The balrogs had rode on the backs of dragons to the city gondolin. During this battle the high captain Gothmog was killed by Ecthelion. After that many other balrogs died up until all seven balrogs were slain. So I decided to leave the undying lands and meet up with an old friend to gain longer life in order to assist the defeat of this army this friend was non other than Eru. This was not my first encounter with him but I made a deal. The deal was that once the army of balrogs and Sauron had been defeated I had to die. "And that's how I come to be here my dear Ardo".

Far from hobbiton in a dark and gloomy place named Gogoroth lava boiled as eight necromancer stood around a pool of fiery lava shouting the incantation "Bring tho of the underworld back to the surface to do the dealings of the one who seeks it, bring the almighty demon of darkness Gothmog back onto land to once again rain terror and command those who also rain terror for The Dark Lord seeks it and its abilities to pull his physical form back into the land above," As the words of the necromancer were spoke there was gurgle in the lava then slowly emerged a beast of shadow and fire standing twice the height of a dragon and wielding a large black axe and fiery whip. The beast spoke the words in an earthquake of sound" Bow as Gothmog is back and soon all balrogs will be for Sauron will conquer all and we will be his army, FOR THE DARK Lord. " Wiping out all of the necromancers Gothmog took one step out of the lava pit and started heading towards the remains of B'aradur.          
  

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