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Rebirth Book One (ON HOLD) by Savywolfgang
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Lilah Castell didn't have much of an eventful life. In fact, it was quite average. Save for the crumbling relationship with her boyfriend, complicated home life, and voyage into drugs, it wasn't much different than any other high schooler's life. So, why was it that the moment Evan, a boy she's never spoken to, asks her for a pencil in history her life does a 180? Delving into a world unknown and mysterious to her, Lilah begins to understand that maybe her existence isn't as insignificant as she thought.
Until Now by JulieM819
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Maisie had planned to dedicate this summer to going out with friends, staying single, and concentrating not only on her job at Layla's, but also her school work. Going into college was a big step to take, leaving behind family and friends to enter the world as an individual. In only a few months, Maisie wouldn't be the same girl. This summer, she had decided, she'd find herself again. Nothing was going to change that. But when she gets tangled into love, this teenager realizes that plans change, and as she falls head-over-heels for someone unexpected, she begins to wonder if this is everything she's wanted. Up until now, it had been. But now, in the summer heat, she discovers that finding a place in this world means letting everyone else go in order to uncover something beautiful: yourself.
Impavid by JulieM819
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Meet Carson. She's finishing up her junior year of high school and looking forward to a summer camp she didn't plan to attend. Enter Luke, the new kid who moves in across the street, who just seems to turn Carson's entire life upside down. From the countless tutoring sessions they share to the secrets they beg each other to keep, their relationship is anything but normal. Enter Chase, someone who loves with such intensity and passion. Join Carson on her journey to find not only love and laughter, but the bravery she never knew was inside of her.
The Awakening of James Island by Alecc0
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ISLAND LEGENDS is an epic fantasy adventure series set in a galaxy reeling from devastating wars, filled with countless alien species, a rich history of powerful magical forces, and the interventions of many gods and demons constantly at war. *** James Island was born two years ago as a fully grown man. While struggling to build a life for himself in the desert city of Tyken Town, James finds his world turned upside down when he is confronted by Evan Goodheart, a strange young alien who claims to be on a mission from the gods to find James and save his own people. Despite trepidation, James finds an affinity with the lost and bewildered Evan and takes it upon himself to help him find his way; all while attempting to maintain some order in the life he's made and his construction work responsibilities. Throughout the course of the day James will discover just how entwined his fate is with Evans as the truth of his unknown past is revealed to him, setting him on a perilous journey that will lead him across the galaxy. *** Among its many influences are the grand operatic adventures of the Star Wars universe, the ensemble cast of desperate heroes of a Final Fantasy game, and the long and all-important journey of The Lord of the Rings and The Wheel of Time series. I also like to think of it as a serial television show, where we learn more of the characters as the progressively complex story develops, with new characters being introduced along the way. ISLAND LEGENDS: THE AWAKENING OF JAMES ISLAND was previously published by Solstice Publishing and is now looking for a new publisher. * Only the first few chapters are available on Wattpad as a teaser *
The Rise of the Phoenix by UntameMe11
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The balance stirs as an ancient creature awakens, a creature that she has to protect, and a prophecy that she has to face. Now, together with her three companions will she ever succeed especially when the world depended on it. Will a girl like her be able to face something as ancient and as powerful as her protector? Join Pyro’s adventure as she takes on the quest that is destined for her, the quest to find out about her past and her future. Will she find all the answers that she is looking for? Or is something dark, deadly and familiar coming her way? “Darkness prevails once light has awakened. A battle is to be won and one shall be taken. Should the world be saved? Or should it be shaken. Two powerful souls, but one dreadful grave. The Phoenix must rise from its cave. It must defeat the demonic knave.”
Not So Dear Diary by InkedRed
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Not so dear Diary is my autobiographic attempt. A novel written by a recovering bad girl, with a very long wake of broken hearts, and unfinished dreams.
Whispers Of Spilt Blood by WoodNymphWarrior
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"In the end, death waits for no one." When Reagan Ortega's brother is accused of killing an innocent man, Reagan knows something is wrong. Her dependable brother, Rick, a murderer? Impossible. Yet all evidence points to the contrary, and to a possible death penalty. Determined to prove his innocence, Reagan soon finds that there may be more at stake than Rick's life. As she begins to uncover dangerous secrets, she finds that some people will do whatever it takes to keep the truth buried. A truth that may reveal the death penalty to be more than an ending. With suspicions of government corruption, shady cops watching her every move, and questionable alliances with wanted criminals, Reagan may just be buried along with the truth. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cover by @_kaylaxmarie
✄---Ashes of Driftwood--- by xXaudreybXx
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Operation: Dard and Devotion by sprinkleofhayat
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As if being kidnapped from a poverty-stricken town in the Middle East was not horrifying enough, Hayat Ishfaq, a 21 year-old American Muslim, is forced to watch the slow beheadings of her own students. But, those are the least of her worries. ~A Wattpad Featured Story~
Drift by Unbroken
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Addison Grace Dubois is cursed with the Drift. Since she was seven, she's had to go from town to town with her aunt because of her curse. Moving to the small town of Havre de Grace seemed to be no big deal to Addison, until she met Kaden, a notorious, irritating punk with haunting history. Fate grabs the two by the hand and drags them into a series of events to leave anyone wishing for more. Can she find a way around the curse? Or will she have to go away forever, again?