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The Lines Between Us | ✔ by _bellawrites222
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COMPLETED Two lines. A mark of love and death. To live or to die? A simple question, really. Most people would choose the former. But to Bella Davies, living wasn't enough. Not when the only reason she was living was to die. The book was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I loved the book. - @kam88639 Omg, this book was so amazing... Wow, I loved it though, thank you so much for writing this :D - @renee_poblenz ITS BROKEN MY HEART! AHHHH.But it's an amazing book!- @dunkini #2 in painfulmemories {5/04/21} #2 in kidnapp {5/04/21} #2 in glass {12/04/21} #2 in crushed {21/04/21} #3 in badluck {18/04/21} #2 in skin {15/05/21} Cover made by me !! Please do not steal any of my writing, I worked really hard on this book and all rights belong to me!! Enjoy reading, I love you all!! ©2021 @aleshawrites_
Of the Orient (A Viking Story) by BlueTea29
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With a life predestined to slavery, she grows up following a set of rules her entire life. But with a single mistake, she is thrown to the same, yet unfamiliar world---she becomes a Viking's thrall.
Our Disconnected Love Story✔ by Ammaspet
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The phone is ringing. But Tanvi was too scared to answer the call. She was not ready to talk to him or even hear his voice. She wanted to run away from the present, but she couldn't evade her present. She hadn't talked to him for the past week, and he had called her a number of times. That day itself, he called 5 times. So, finally, with trembling hands, she answered the phone to tell him the truth. "Hello," he said as soon as Tanvi answered the call. Tanvi voice was shaking she didn't know what to say. But she mustered her courage somehow and said, " Please don't contact me again. I know I have played with your feelings without knowing who you actually are. I know I have committed a terrible mistake, or I guess, a sin by doing this, but now I want to end this for once and for all. I don't think you can understand me and forgive me, but the only explanation I say to you is that I am really sorry." He remained silent all this while and did not utter a word. He came to realize that nothing more was left for him to talk. He disconnected the call as soon as she finished her monologue. Tanvi, a +1 student, decided to attract her crush indirectly gets his phone number and starts talking to him anonymously. Initially, she got rejected, but later, earns his trust and friendship. Slowly their friendship reached another level through their sweet phone calls. Then, the real truth came out. He was not the crush whom Tanvi imagines him to be. So what would Tanvi do? Would she ever meet the person with whom she developed such a relationship? Would that person ever want to meet Tanvi after knowing that she played with his feelings, knowingly or unknowingly? Could they be together? Let's see what fate has to do with both of them. A simple love story with its own twists and turns. This is my 1st story. Hope you will give it a chance, and I'll make sure you won't get too bored.
The Ager {Weekly Updates} by kimberly_rash
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𝘽𝙤𝙤𝙠 1 𝙤𝙛 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙎𝙚𝙧𝙞𝙚𝙨! (𝕆𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣 𝕓𝕠𝕠𝕜𝕤 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕤𝕠𝕠𝕟) 𝘽𝙡𝙪𝙧𝙗: When a beloved friend of the 'nerds squad' goes missing. The teens suspect it's the woman that lives in the old abandoned house and her evil little daughter. The abandoned house that is supposed to have no one living in there. But you can see shadows within the widows, children scream coming from the top window. And little skull bones in the backyard. What happened to these kids? Will, we ever see them again? Who lives in the old creepy house? Want the answers? Keep reading! Vote, comment, and add to the reading list so you can keep reading! ╰☆☆ 𝐑𝐞𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐬 𝟏𝟑-𝟐𝟓 + ☆☆╮ What did the readers have to say about 'The Ager'? "Had some creepy parts, not gonna lie. I was hungry when I read. The whole part about comparing hotdogs and ketchup with blood and chopped-up body parts made me sick. I was creeped out. You did an excellent job at delivering that." -@RoyalBlueMoon 𝕆𝕟𝕘𝕠𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕲𝖊𝖓𝖗𝖊: - 𝕄𝕪𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕪 - 𝕋𝕖𝕖𝕟 𝔽𝕚𝕔𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 - ℍ𝕠𝕣𝕣𝕠𝕣 - 𝔸𝕔𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 Achievements: -Ranked 11 in creepy stories out of 4.9k (June, 3, 2021) -Ranked 1 in ager out of 21 stories (April 5, 2021) (-LOL IM #1 Because its the title of my book) -Ranked 98 in horror-thriller out of 20k stories (May 18, 2021) -Ranked 1 in deadbody out of 199 (May 5, 2021) -Ranked 6 in horrifying out of 1k (May 4, 2021) -Ranked 9 in -thriller out of 1.1k (May 1, 2021)
His Hand In The Shadows by ThatzHer
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Norlyn has suffered many tragedies over the years, from poverty to poisoned waters to drought and now enemy invaders are turning the country to rubble. Ayla Nkri is a villager in Norlyn. She was taught from young what her duty was to her country and to her family: she must graduate the academy and find her place in the military or royal guards. Her grades are in line with acceptance to the renown Orhem Academy. But in a new world of rules and discipline, her vulgar attitude and magic might not be as impressive when compared to that of the upperclass. She and every other like her, are sacrifices for Norlyn and she must remember this-even when faced with the heir to a great noble house, Sir Zayd of Cormill, who insists there is much more to life. A noble who has no knowledge of the the suffering that peasants must face if they do not willingly lay down their lives for their country or know of the negotiations taking place between allied nations, that sort of person has no right to give her advice in what is best for her country or her family. Strong willed and determined as Ayla is, there something in the shadows-someone is watching, and without her knowing it, she becomes a puppet on a string.
Loki: It's Complicated (On Hold) by FrostyNoMuffins
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After spending around 2 years in the dungeons of Asgard, and suffering pain each day of that sentence. Loki is forced to live with the Avengers. He has internal struggles with his past that keep coming back to haunt him, as well as the external struggle of having to deal with the Avengers. Honestly, I am pretty excited about writing this. I think it will turn out great! Please take a look at the book, maybe even comment? When people comment on my book, it makes my whole day! This book will not have any swearing. Anything you recognize belongs to Marvel. I wrote this when I was 13. Now I have a diploma, so maybe I'll rewrite this someday.
Fake Me To Church by BlueJay325
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Secrets, Scandal...and Murder. //// Ahmed Heavenstate just wanted to fit in. A recently adopted high school freshman in a brand new town, he'd barely gotten his foot in the door before being targeted by the headmaster's entitled son Steven. But when a cruel prank brings both boys face to face with a brutalized corpse in the school's main building, these warring adolescents are swept into a terrifying world bloodied with the long-buried secrets of their tight-lipped community. As the passions and prejudices of old money and new acquaintances whirl relentlessly through their town of sheltered closets and the skeletons inside them, Steven and Ahmed will discover a truth more terrifying than anything their paragon of sacred laws and tradition would dare allow them to believe.
Bob by PhilPages
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Bob is an adolescent growing up in the small Ontario town of Ouchichagwebobigoing. From an early age, he has had an almost magical connection with animals, but when Bob's friend Bruce the Bear chugs a barrel of home-brewed honey lager that he's found in Bob's garage and then gets himself shot in the street, Bob begins to realize that his society does not view animals in the same way he does. Struggling between a youthful idealism he cannot compromise and a ruthless pragmatism he believes necessary, Bob must either destroy himself or convince others to see things in the same way he does.