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#THE HASHTAG by ShadieTree
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Lexi Lennon has a bad attitude and everyone knows it. Becoming or staying friends with someone has never been a priority, because she didn't give a damn about what people thought of her. So when an anonymous website surfaces at school, threatening to reveal everyone's deepest darkest secrets, Lexi doesn't even bat any eye. That is, of course, before she realizes that her secrets are the ones at stake. -cover made by pressure-
No Place Like Rome by DiannaFreeman
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After a tragic thing has happens in her life that has left her incredibly hurt, Ashley has been dreaming about a boy who is unlike anyone she has ever met before. In her dreams, this boy has saved her and since then she has felt a special connection with him. She wants to find this man, even though she doesn’t know if he exists or not. All she knows is that he is the man of her dreams. She has made it her life’s mission to find him. After she has graduated from University, she and her friend, Rose, decide to go Rome and Paris for a month each but in Rome, something happens that Ashley didn’t expect to happen.
Ruin (Under Construction) by AhdaciSaru
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Alara Edge is a seventeen year old girl living in a far from perfect society. When a trip to a power plant goes awry, she and her classmates are exposed to unknown airborne material. Since then, Alara has felt strange even though there is nothing physically wrong with her. By accident, she realizes that she has powers that cannot be explained. Before she can figure out why and how, she, along with everyone else exposed, is taken to a research facility to be "observed." After some time, Alara realizes that something else is going on—something more sinister than just observation.
The Craters in the Moon by jetaime26
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Arden Gray: A catty, beautiful, endlessly underestimated teenage girl drowning in a crippling tidal wave of depression. She spends more time in the realm of books than reality, and struggles to keep her head above water as her world seemingly comes crashing down around her. Lucas Riverton: The seventeen year old boy in the awkward stage between child and adulthood, who works at a local bookstore as a means of escape. He barely knows Arden, but is positive that there is something about her, something he wants to devote the rest of his life to figuring out. Two worlds connect in an unfathomable force as young lovers relish in the discovery of a feeling that is beyond description--- and do everything in their power to prevent the inevitable destruction of it. ~~ REVIEWS ~~ "A poignant story about the deterioration of love between two young teenagers that don't know anything but how to fall." "...flawless, simple, and very imaginative." "This is a wonderful, angsty story...read in one sitting!" "Arden Gray is a unique and quirky character that I found myself growing attached to right away...This author manages to pack more emotion in one sentence of dialogue than most people can in a whole paragraph of metaphorical description."
Delude by salmasey
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Love You Endlessly (Larry Stylinson) by Thissleepykitty
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❝All we have is time, and with that we can be infinite.❞
Divorce by lindavorjeinova
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"I saw that little electricity in them that the camera gave out. She was darkness, she did not become darkness and she did not embrace darkness. She is darkness. She was always darkness and I fell in love with her, I fell in love with her darkness."