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----------------taking a break--------------- Ruby and Hannah meet their idols on a day trip. What will happen now? Will they be known as just fans or will they be more? They may become close friends, or maybe even closer. But most of all, will the fans be happy about it?

Charlie Lenehan, most popular guy in school. Then me, Gabriella Brooks , the most invisible girl in school until i get paired up with Charlie and things take a turn. THIS IS NO LONGER A BARS AND MELODY FANFIC