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Dial-tone by ashily101
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Gabriella Montreth has had to endure much more than the average 17 year old. Take a world that is crumbling, a force field keeping you contained, a mum who can time travel and a strange symbol branded onto your eyelids and you have a recipe for disaster. The cause for this strange mix? Technological advances much bigger then we ever could have imagined.
Love You Endlessly (Larry Stylinson) by Thissleepykitty
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❝All we have is time, and with that we can be infinite.❞
The Love War by StarChild2
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Jada’s a normal 16 year old who has an obsession with baking, loves designing and has the life of a normal girl. Well almost. Exactly one summer ago she and her friend Skylar were invited to a party. Now, Jada being the friendly and bubbly person she was. She accepted. However skip to a spiked drink, some wooziness, then you have an eventful night. She woke up the next day next to some guy.. A senior at that. Jada was embarrassed and ashamed of herself. She didn't even know who the guy was. Now long story short she got pregnant and now her son Knox is in this world. Now meet Damon Robinson. He's the bad boy of Eastwood High. With his dark hair and his chocolate brown eyes it's no wonder girls love him. The guy every girl at the school wants. Except Jada. When she transfers to the school she wants nothing to do with him. Now this catches Damon's attention and he makes it his mission to make Jada fall for him. Jada refuses to even be associated with someone like Damon. All Jada want is to get through high school in one piece, while raising her son and eventually get into college. But Damon isn't making that easy on her.