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A Brown-Eyed Girl by noctunaround
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Kelsey has been haunted by her father's death ever since she was eight years old. Now, he is turning up in her dreams. Or at least that's what she thinks they are. She learns quickly that nothing is really what she thought it was. Magic is real, there's a chance she could see her father again, and some people might actually be worth trusting. Particularly, one good-humored, green-eyed person. Most importantly, her brown eyes are more than the only decent part of her looks. The color of her eyes is the key to who she is, what she could become, and the power she has only to unlock.
The Alpha And Omega Of Magic by TigerBee
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"You're taking a risk . . . a very fatal risk." Dartel's voice rang in her ears. Shawna Tucker is at a new school for the gifted. When she comes across an age old Kyanite stone, she decides to keep it a secret. The unexpected occurs when she is transported to Laiezant—a jewel town studded between exquisite vineyards. As history repeats itself and truths of deep depths are unfolded, Shawna is on a whirlwind where she rediscovers thrill and romance.
Messenger by BlakeMcFarland
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Late night babble, a trifle and nothing more.
Stones of Lezella by sugaredtoast
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When the stones that keep Lezella a safe distance away from Earth begin to self destruct, all of Lezella's inhabitants are in grave danger. Little by little, Lezella begins to self destruct and begin to get closer and closer to Earth. Lezellians need the humans' help, but don't have time. Will this beautiful planet full of beautiful creatures be gone forever? Or can six orphans manage to save their planet?
Fake It 'Til You Make It by kathrynp
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Demi Lovato was your typical,everyday celebrity. The Disney star that had the most dazzling smile, lived a perfect life, was a great role model.Except she didn't always feel that way. She self-harmed, suffered with bipolar and bulimia disorders. She deceived everyone. Until one mistake changed her life forever.
smile by totallyinsane
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Evie Hart is no more special than any other teenager -despite her Care House past- and she has no other plans at eighteen (seventeen if she's honest) years old besides leaving Sixth Form, finishing her Gap Year with her friends and then going to University. And getting her driving licence back. Follow Evie on her journey as she tries to keep her biological siblings away from her adopted family, keep herself and her friends from going completely off the rails with their activities, prove that driving into a lamp post was an accident and that she needs her car back and of course battle off the masses of boys who want to go out with her. Well, not masses but we can keep that a secret. "This captured me within in the first few sentences. Believe me when I say this is one of my new favourites!" -ilovedyoumore ___________________________________ Smile. You never know who may be falling in love with it. When you smile, I smile. A smile is a language that even a baby understands. Don’t cry because it’s over, SMILE because it happened. A smile is a curve that sets everything straight. A friendly look, a kindly smile, one good act, and life’s worthwhile. Smile – it’s the second best thing you can do with your lips.