A story I started writing for school, which I am now continuing for my own personal use. Please comment any thoughts you have. I want to know how to make my story the best it can be. c':

Well let's see ... I have done things at my school that teacher disapprove of, so why not make it a trip to Hogwarts? Where everything is made up and the points don't matter! Where smart-allicks/nerds remind you of Ravenclaw, kind-hearted people remind you of the Hufflepuffs, to where the gullible, brave students remind you of the Gryffindors ... and well, you can guess that the Slytherin's in your school are the next 'Crime-stopper' criminals. So take a hop on down memory lane, where we brainwash you and make you laugh till you cry!

Did you ever wonder what was life like for team Starkid before they went to college and started preforming? What if I tell you that some of them went to the same high school, and were best friends even then. But they weren't so nice and lovable. The were bad, mean and arrogant, they ruled their high school, and people feared and respected them. But there was more to them than meets the eye, they were not average teenagers, they had problems and secrets you couldn't even imagine. I was one of them, and this is our story told my way. **I do not own Team Starkid, they are real people **All events in this story are made-up, Team Starkid has nothing to do with them

(Warning! IF YOU HAVE NOT READ ALL THREE HUNGER GAMES BOOKS DO NOT READ THIS STORY) Emily Rue Mellark is a 12 year old girl who knows that her parents have had a tough past but dosnt know what happend in their past. she is determined to hear the whole story. but when her moms best friend/Hunting partner turns up just when she was about to get an anser part of her mothers past might become her past as well.