This is a short story from my English class, I want to know if I should rewrite it as a longer story and flesh it out more. Any feedback would be great! Mother might need some help, that's all I can say. It IS a short story, I might spoil it otherwise haha. Currently has 1 part but I'm working on drafts too!
FEMALE CHARACTER IS INNOCENT AND CHILDISH!! READ THE TAGS!! YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!! "Tell me something Azron." Lucifer said as he walked closer to the dangerous Demon. Azron turned so now he was facing his creator, the same one that's scared of him. "What will you do if we gave you a mate?" A dark smirk came upon his...