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Ivory Child ✔️ by reena-ns
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What happens when the perfect student meets the boy that can cause a school to fall apart? When the school's local stoner gets murdered, it's up to Mel Park, a frenemy of Jonah's, to help bring his killer to justice. The only problem is... she has no idea who it is. With Jonah's last text conversations to go off of, Mel begins investigating everyone around her, including her classmates. How far will one teenaged girl go to find out the truth? The end may be closer than it appears, and Mel must find out who the perpetrator is before her fate meets Jonah's. --- "This book... balanced the suspense and the feelings of adolescence so well!" -@nicoleontap "This was honestly such a good read. Great characters, plot twists in every chapter keeping you engaged, and unique writing style. Loved this!" -@thatonewasianqueen "This is one of the best mysteries I have ever read, no doubt about that. The characters were very well fleshed out, with good emotions, good dialogue, and amazing descriptions!" -@Mochis4lifeq52627
The Donut Shop ✔️ by reena-ns
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In a small Arizona town, average teen Ethan Chen is just trying to survive another day of hell, er, high school with his best friend, Tweed, at his side. However, his world is turned upside-down when he learns that their favorite hang-out spot is closing. After Sol Bakery is boarded up, Ethan and Tweed team up to gain the help of the uptight and impossibly bossy student council president to keep the bakery alive. With her, she brings a boy that shakes up Ethan's whole point of view... and soon, he starts questioning everything he once believed, including what love means. With incoming competitors, murder mysteries, and friendship fiascos, can Ethan and his friends save Sol Bakery or will the bakery be lost forever? Copyright ©️ 2020 HurricaneKareena. Exclusively on Wattpad. If you are reading this novel on any other website, you run the risk of malware and viruses. To read the entirety of the book in its full, safe form, read The Donut Shop on Wattpad. #1 in Doughnut Featured on YA's Clueless Reading List First book of the Chen Chronicles *On my fourth draft of this book* *Up until chapter _16_ has been edited*
Fleeting Moments-Ramayan Oneshots by Mochis4lifeq52627
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"Things end, but memories last forever." Before he defeated Ravan, before he became the saviour of the world, before he sat upon the throne of Kosala, Ram was a simple prince. Before his wife, Sita, was abducted, before he had to endure endless hardships, before he had to kill thousands of rakshasas, Ram was a mere boy. Before he was Raghuvanshi, Scion of Ikshvaku, Ruler of the most powerful state in Ancient India, Ram was just a son, a husband, and a brother to three. So these are the moments before, before any of that happened. Moments where the four princes of Kosala could laugh without worry, moments where they could cry over the small things, moments where they could simply live without a burden on their shoulders. Moments when they could just be people. And yet, as all happy memories do, these moments passed by like a fleeting car, never to be experienced, felt, or known again, just remaining embedded in the minds of whom they belonged. After Ram defeated Ravan, after he ruled Kosala, after he became King, he remembered these moments with a smile. These are the memories which forever shall be remembered. These are the fleeting moments of the Ramayan. Note-Uh, some of these do not match the blurb. "In a Tree" is not a happy chapter.
The Princes of Ayodhya-The Ramayan Through Short Stories by Mochis4lifeq52627
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Ancient India. Approximately 7 thousand years ago. The Kingdom of Kosala. A dutiful crown prince exiled from his kingdom for fourteen years. A loving wife who follows him, and is captured. A demon king who threatens the entire mortal population of the world. Ram, the eldest of the four princes of Ayodhya, is known to be righteous, good, and an eternal follower of justice and law. Beloved by all in his home state of Kosala and beyond, he defeats thousands of demons even in his teenage years, fabled as an undefeatable, almost Godly hero. His marries the beautiful Sita, and is all set to be crowned king. Then, the unthinkable happens. He's sentenced to 14 years of exile. Followed by his loyal wife and a brother who would sacrifice his life for him, Ram makes his way into the Chitrakut forest near his home city, and makes a life there killing demons, gathering berries, and blissfully awaiting for his exile to finish. When his wife is kidnapped and kept prisoner in the land of Lanka by a lustful demon king named Ravan whose devilish exploits litter the pages of books and haunt children's nightmares, Ram has to follow a track, make allies, and find friends in the world of terror. Ram has to wage a war against a king who has never lost. Ram has to reclaim his wife and be crowned the king of Ayodhya without losing himself. This tale navigates a life before exile, a life throughout exile, and a life after the exile which redefined the word 'hardship', tested relationships, lives, and strength. This is the story of the Ramayan. (Warning-This story is very funny and really not as serious as the description)