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Us by rewinding
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[ "I'm Lacey." Those were the first words he had heard come out of her mouth, and she had spoken them with a nervous laugh. ] He wasn't a tough, cool bad boy. She wasn't a pretty, awkward good girl. They were both just two average people who found themselves helplessly falling for each other.
Everyone's their own Gossip Girl *BOOK PREVIEW* by SugarCoated
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Based off the lives of the spontaneous achieving teens of Skylights, like any wildfire, gossip runs through the eyes to the mouth, feeding the Gossip Girl in everyone. Primarily focused around the entertaining lives of the divergent middle class to elite, follow us and watch the lives of these unrelatable teens that we all had once wished we could be. But the Gossip Girl in everyone always gets the best of us and the larger the fire spreads, the more power we feel we have around us. Just be careful not be so too hung up with that power because you never know what gossip will hit you next. Mwah! ~Anonymous. All rights reserved Copyright © 2014
Luminary h.s by writing41D
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"Would you just look at us, A cancer patient and a Drug dealer, how cute." @Writing41d all rights reserved.
21 Days by Rachel_Megan
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Death is final, but what if you could change it? Leora is just a normal girl whose brother is in a coma from a terrible car accident. When she discovers she can see death she makes a deal with him. If she can prove that humans matter death will save the life of her brother. But if she fails the consequences are deadly
Ditch The Suspenders by volleyqueen2222
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Anais Ross isn't known as the popular girl at school. What the heck, she isn't even considered a normal girl. She is a nerd, with braces, glasses, and don't forget the suspenders; her prize possession. A day doesn't pass by without Anais getting teased. She is the target for Ironwood Ridge's Football Jock, Travis, and his posse. They have been making Anais' High School experience a living hell. Anais being the innocent, quiet, scared girl she is, never has the courage to do anything about it. Until one day Anais has had enough. Travis takes his teasing to the next level and this is the last time he'll get away with it. Anais is sick and tired of being the target for Travis and his posse, tired of the torture they put her through on the daily basis. It's time for Travis to get a taste of his own medicine. You might ask how Travis will get the taste of his own medicine. Well, there's a little word called Revenge. Revenge will change everything. Copyright © Volleyqueen2222 2014
A Lovely Encounter by volleyqueen2222
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Have you ever had an undying passion for a sport? Well, for Irina Hayes, it's volleyball. Irina isn't scared to get a little dirt on her spandex from diving onto the floor. She isn't scared of running into bleachers or even crashing into people in the stands. It's always been a dream of hers to play volleyball in college and her dream can become a reality if she happens to catch the eyes of some recruiters while she's at a tournament in California. Now, while in California, she just so happens to meet a special someone. He's a total sweetheart and let's just say any girl would die if they had the chance to talk to him or even spend time with him. It all leads to Irina having to make some huge decisions. Some decisions that might cause her to leave her beloved friends and maybe lover behind. Irina never thought life could be so wonderful, but at the same time so awful. Sometimes, mixing your undying passion and love life together, doesn't always work out the way you want it to. Especially when it involves you getting stuck in between a love triangle. Will Irina make her big break in volleyball? Better yet, will she end up with a boyfriend after all of this? Cover By: admissable Copyright © Volleyqueen2222 2014
You are the Source by love_author
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The importance of her ability leaves Meredith stunned. Does her capturer become something more or is he hiding something. With the whirlwind of love she forgets the importance of her task... Free will or family? She is left fighting for her life in a dystopian world.
Sempiternal by GrammaRithmatist
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A military experiment gone awry sent an entire country spiralling into chaos, death and destruction. The modernised nuclear weapons had malfunctioned, releasing toxins that were only meant to immobilise the afflicted. To everyone's horror, the toxins had transmuted (perhaps divulging the warped truth that it had been parasites the scientists had been working with all along ) into a lethal parasite that killed instantly, latching and residing within the minds of its hosts. To those who barely survived, there was an unspoken promise that the parasite, which now lay dormant, would finish its job one day. Only those who had once been mentally- impaired survived this cataclysm, having miraculously recovered in the wake of this ordeal. Then came news of people developing powers, people dissolving into occult groups, going insane and then dying a painful death- one filled with unadulterated madness. But that was not all. There was a madman bent on saving himself and establishing a new and improved rule where survival of the mentally fittest was key. I had to stop them. I had the means. Born with clinically- diagnosed obsessive compulsive disorder and now a telepathic with powers that were beyond me, I could very well level the playing field...
The Devil's Enchantress by emlillian46
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The hooded figure materializes in Lux's dreams every night. Waiting. Taunting her. Every morning he is gone and all she is left with is the vague memory. When the lines between dream and reality blur, she has no idea who to trust with her secrets. Voices invade her thoughts, a shadow haunts her. They will think she is crazy. Maybe they already do. Lux believes that she has gone insane when she discovers she is descended from an ancient line of witches that can be traced back generations. The Circle of the Raven. When Caden finally finds Lux, he fears it may be too late. Their world might be too far gone to even try to save it. All he can do is try and prepare Lux to face her nightmares and become the war machine they desperately need. Caden must teach Lux that her past cannot be allowed to influence her future, or else she cannot possibly face what is coming. Embracing her heritage is the only way to survive in this newfound world, but when her past horrors start to catch up with her, she is faced with a terrible reality. Secrets are revealed, laws are tested, and only one question remains; who's side is she on? Thanks to @BeautifulGoddes for the AMAZING trailer!
Sticks and Stones by intuemini
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