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Escape (Solaris Cane: Book One) by SeizetheDay0110
SeizetheDay0110
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We exist. That's what was written in the letter. And after that, her life changed. Four years after an accident leaves her without memories, Solaris Cane is doing pretty well. She lives with her family, has a great life. But something bothers her, a constant emptiness she feels. A man appears, claiming she has the power to help a planet that she knows she's never been to. A woman named Alaine claims that she's meant to help, meant to do something great. Solaris doesn't know what to do, but as she pieces the puzzles together, can she find out more about herself? What about her memories, the one which she thought long gone? Can she rise up to the expectations? (By the by, the chapters here are mostly unedited, though I really do try to notice all the errors in time. But once they're up, well, yeah. It'll be going through complete editing once the book is finished.) Credits go to _-ProudlyMe-_ for the cover!
How to Play the Triangle and Other Life Tips from a Detective by VeritableGalanthus
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Someone once said that life is like a box of chocolates. Another someone also claimed that life is like a labyrinth. There are also reports that life is like a roller coaster. As a detective, I can deduce from this that life involves a lot of throwing up, screaming, men with cow heads and nobody likes the marzipan. Hence I, Detective Veritable Galanthus will guide you through life's twists, turns, ups and downs like an acrobatic dance teacher. I once knew an acrobatic dance teacher, he turned out to be pervert.