so here are my fan fiction pet peeves. no hate to any author, these are just things that annoy me, and a lot of other people when reading fan fiction, or even stories in general. this is just to give you an idea of what your readers want/ don't want, and to improve your story. feel free to leave some of your own pet peeves in the comments, and let me know if you agree or disagree with me! [lmao i've come to realize that i just rant about terrible fan fictions here😭💀] lower case intended highest ranking: #1 in #petpeeves ♥︎

[FINISHED 2017] Louis Tomlinson always wanted to have children. At the age of 29 and after years of failed relationships he decided he wasn't going to wait for the right person anymore, so he had a baby on his own. But what will happen when that child gets sick? What will Louis be willing to do to save his child's life? This is a Mpreg story in which male pregnancy is as common as female pregnancy. If you don't like this kind of story don't read it. You've been warned! Finished in January, 2017

((warning!: hey everyone! i wrote this when i was like 15-16? and i realized i never put a rating on this story. it's pretty explicit! (i tagged it as mature but i'm going to put in the description that it's 18+ just so it's very clear)) Orgasms. You see that word and you think it's hot...right? Wrong. What if you had them multiple times a day? In front of your class. Your teachers. Your friends. ... Your mom. Harry Styles is a seventeen year old boy from England, he was recently diagnosed with RGS (Restless Genital Syndrome) And guess who's doing a project on the disorder for his medical sciences class? Eighteen year old, Louis Tomlinson. Imagine if you moaned during your algebra test. How does the word orgasm sound to you now? ╰☆╮ ╰☆╮ ╰☆╮ ╰☆╮ ╰☆╮ [© Copyright 2016 All work is property of louuuology, any duplication or reproduction of all or part of the work without explicit permission by the author is illegal] cover by protruding™ playlist for this story: https://open.spotify.com/user/axxmber/playlist/16UmEymIoHwOVdKpemDoQ7

He wasn't. He couldn't be. Louis was humping his leg. Maybe he was sleeping, Harry's thoughts spun wildly, having a dirty dream. But Harry knew Louis up and down, the patterns of his breathing, the tension in his muscles - this wasn't sleeping Louis. As if to confirm Harry's thoughts, Louis gripped him slightly and unmistakably ground his hips. A soft moan escaped Harry's lips. Louis stilled. Harry held his breath. No no no please don't stop, God. Louis' hands traveled up his body lightly, the barely there touch making him hiss. "'S this ok?" Louis' voice sounded uncertain, hesitant, like his fingers delicately tracing Harry's spine. Or: A whole lot of cute fluffiness takes a horrifying descent into hardcore godless smut. But it's ok though cuz it's Louis and Harry and they're adorable little cupcakes who love each other very much.

Louis has been a paramedic for five years now ... seen and experienced things you'd never believe. Yet not once has he ever been thrown into a situation he couldn't handle... Until now , here he was face to face with his ex boyfriend who was about to give birth to a baby. Or Harry left Louis five years ago , they come face to face when Harry goes into labour in the middle of his weekly shop.

"It's like my brain is playing hide and seek.. only one day I won't find it." Louis Tomlinson and Harry Styles have been best friends since kindergarten. The pair was inseparable. At age fifteen, they became more than just bestfriends. At age sixteen, there was a diagnosis, and the world came crumbling down on them. Louis had one of the rare cases of adolescent Alzheimer's. Now, at age 26, Harry can feel his love is slipping through his fingers. And there isn't a thing he can do about it. This is their story. [COMPLETED] Trailer: https://youtu.be/3sMDLWRY2pE COVER BY: @lostinstyles__ ©bittersweetlou2018

"We can go into the hiding room. Come on, babe. We haven't done anything yesterday." Harry's lips caress Louis' soft skin of his neck, quickly looking around, making sure they are out of sight of the camera's. "Are you sure? Harry our girlfriends are on the other side of the island." Louis whispers. His eyes are closed as he enjoys the gentle touch of the other boy. "It's not like you cared before yesterday. Come on, Lou. I know you want to. Want to feel you." Harry is slowly sucking on Louis' sensitive spot, making the other boy moan. "Fine, but this is our secret Harry. No one can ever know about this. I'm not gay and I love Eleanor. I'm just horny and it's only comfort sex, because we miss our girlfriends, yeah?" "Mmmh" Harry agrees. "Only comfort sex because we miss our girlfriends, nothing more." What is Temptation Island? Temptation Island is a reality tv show that make 4 couples test their relationship. The boys are put on one side of the island, surrounded by beautiful girls whose job it is to seduce them and make them cheat on their girlfriends. On the other side of the island are the girls, surrounded by hot guys who have exactly the same goal. Both resorts are full of camera's. The couples are recorded all day, putting every single mistake they make on tape. There is only one place in both resort that's camera and microphone free: the hiding room. Each mistake they make will be shown to their partner on the other side. It's the only form of communication the couples have for 3 weeks. What will happen if Harry and Louis participate in this game with their girlfriends? Will they be seduced by the gorgeous girls that are walking around? Or is their real temptation each other? #1 LarryStylinson 7/3/2021 #1 OneDirection 10/3/2021