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The Rise of Poison  by Lunanightstar
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A friendship is a beautiful thing to maintain. However, is it worth a potential deadly betrayal? For two young men, their childhood friendship is about to be put to the test. As Yuuto and Kenta will learn, all good things must come to an end. -cover made by mintaftertaste- © Copyright 2014. Please, don't steal, copy or redistribute without my permission.
Project REVIVE by Inkdreams
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Nineteen-year-old Hezekiah Quinn has a slight problem–he can't stay dead. Along with his faithful companion, Diane Brant, Hezekiah must use all of his abilities to evade getting re-captured by the organization responsible for his condition, and find the answers to questions such as: "Who am I? Why was I experimented on? Who are my parents?" and "What happened to my memories?" But Hezekiah is a part of the organization's Project REVIVE. He's not escaping their influences without a fight.
Parts of Falling In Love by Whirlingstorm
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She couldn't keep her eyes off him and he couldn't stop thinking about her. "How do you know when you're falling in love with someone?" - That was their question. ----- Two point of views, one goal: To explore and discover the parts of falling in love.
Sea of Words by risingtide
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"Her story is the clicks and taps of fingers on a keyboard."
The One Without Words by destacia
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"Go ahead," I said, backing up against the pink wall of the shop. "Do something other than glare at me." I waited. One, two, three seconds... and nothing. I raised my chin at him. "You're boring me, mute boy." He stepped closer. Leaned toward me as his gaze burned into mine. Then... ❀ ❀ ❀ After three months in juvenile detention, it's time for Romy Pereira to help out with her family's flower shop. And it's not all bad... until they hire Jack Michel to work beside her. He doesn't speak, communicating with glares and scowls instead of words, and seems to be more interested in literal rocks than other human beings. And with an ex-convict mother, her friends drifting away, and the flower shop falling apart, the last thing Romy wants to deal with is Jack's attitude. She'll forever praise the day he screws up big time and gets himself fired, but until that day comes, it's mostly one cold-hearted girl, her silent (but still infuriating) coworker, and a whole lot flowers. [word count: 100k] [originally written in 2014-2015; re-write completed 2020-2021] ❀ Rankings ❀ #1 in #badgirl #1 in #goodboy #1 in #flowershop #1 in #sociopath
Contract (Under MAJOR reconstruction) by 1marry
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"War swallows humans whole- It's only our nature to want more than we deserve. In essence, we are demons without a tale to speak of. We are nothing without our sins. Of course, that's what I tell every human I come across. They wouldn't cross paths with me if they weren't convinced we were the same. Power. Money. Status. They're always longing for something like it. Still, this time, it's different." -Iris, Contract
For the longest Time (On Hold or Really slow Updates) by marvellous_anna
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Isabel Carson never really stood a chance. As soon as William Preston entered her life, he turned her world upside down. He brings all these new aspects into her life that she now has to deal with. And maybe, just maybe they're exactly what she needs. © - Copyright 2014 - marvellous_anna
Chamberlain Academy by glamoural
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Chamberlain Academy is one of the most prestigious boarding schools in the country, a place for fine education and shaping some of the most affluent children in the world. Follow the journey of several different students and faculty throughout their year, as they experience their own ups, downs, and everything else in between.