IDK YET- Feedback on storyline pls- Idk what I'm doing. The storyline so far: Aether lives in an apartment, not far away from Barbatos Park (Idk I couldn't come up with a name). He and his silky cat, Xiao, go through the challenges of working at a fast-food place and also going to college. While Aether works, Xiao goes on his own adventures, meeting up with other strange cats as well. (Updates when I can lol and the mature content warning is because of gore and sometimes use of swearing)

The land of Teyvat; full of mysteries and tales, vast and beautiful. What lays in the land you ask? Two lovers and a travel guide who like to bargain with hilichurls.

As the wind blew through Wangshu inn, Xiao made out a small figure walking towards the inn, eyes of distrust and hurt, almost about to pour. Paimon floating next to him with a worried expression. The winds carried secrets and tales, the breeze picked up. The two who were walking then turned into dust.