KeeganVanPatten
I went back and reread the original story that I put up in Feb. towards the very end it was apparent that I had half-assed the end, and cheated everyone out of the ending that they deserved. I went back, setting out to give a better ending, and ended up adding a whole new section of the story. Hopefully this one has a better ending. I left the original up for any of you wanting to compare it to this. Let me know by leaving your thoughts in the comments. Or don't. You have free will. By all means, use it.