Hey guys. This is just a part of a story I am currently writing and it is under major construction, so expect me to edit chapters continuously. This is my very first piece so it may not be incredible. However I am going to be doing a lot of work on it so you should hopefully see a lot more in the future. A bit of background on the main character in the story: Jaymes Braddock is a young lord of Ysgar, a large hold in the western parts of Aardìn. His father was lord over Valöreon Hall, a castle at the heart of Ysgar. Jaymes was born with the mark of the Zephyr, a strange silver and white marking on his back moving from his left shoulder to above his heart. This is marking symbolises his unique ability to control the eastern and western winds. At the age of 13, his father was murdered by an unknown person in the dead of night. Jaymes swore he would find the murderer and avenge his father's death. To do so, he found a clan of assassins who were loyal to his father and learned their ancient art. He quickly rose through their ranks, earning the title of Qrelle, the assassins' word for Master. So yeah, I hope you enjoy it and that you give me some good feedback!