Hello <3. This is my first story, so i would love some advice, just don't be mean :)

My alternative and extended take on the Homicidal Liu story. Taking place after the incidents of Jeffery Woods psychotic break. Liu is no longer with us. That is what the papers said anyways... Where shall a spirit be set to rest when the soul itself has split into two parts? Good and Evil. Zalgo's Realm. Of course.

When Nancy Gale was eight, she was involved in an unknown attack that left several children brutally murdered, leaving those that survived either injured or traumatized. While she did survive, she was left with no memory of the past two months of her life.... Ten years later, a now older Nancy decides to spend her summer holidays somewhere quiet; she decides to return to the remote town in the Southern side of California called 'Blackwood Town'. Here, she was to receive not only a sense of independence, but some closure to her forgotten past. During the course of her stay, she comes across many of the townspeople; some of whom appear quite disturbing. It isn't long before she becomes reacquainted with an old and mysterious being she had encountered long ago; someone that she once considered her 'Friend'. Just when things couldn't get any weirder, Nancy begins to notice that something is off with the town; from unsolved brutal murders of young children to mysterious disappearances and unexplained death of some of the local townspeople, she begins to suspect that something supernatural is behind it all. To make matters worse, it seems that someone...or SOMETHING, has been stalking her every move. Can Nancy and her new friends uncover the town's secrets and stop the evil that threatens to take over the town? Or will they be consumed by the darkness that threatens their very lives? Read to find out!