Manveer
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Udayveer's Saviour by mannati_1707
Udayveer's Saviour
mannati_1707
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Hi. This is my first story. Its my perspective about Polo Award Ceremony in Dekha Ek Khwaab Show. Please bear with all spellings and grammar, as its my first ever story. Kindly comment if you want me to change any part or also you can share your ideas. Warning - Slow Updates
 The Mismatch by ilove_dek
The Mismatch
ilove_dek
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An ordinary college going fun loving girl was enjoying her life to the fullest until she was compelled to marry a ruthless arrogant businessman who is the king of his offensive world.Things get complicated when they get bounded by the sacred bond of marriage. Udayveer Singh once with a broken, cold heart had determined to never let his heart weaken for someone but then he slowly fell for the girl who has mistakenly stepped in his life. Manyata Shastri ,the innocent beauty who had no knowledge of the cruel world one day find herself trapped in his world.She becomes his obsession, his possession, his to cherish and his to break. Story characters are borrowed from Sony TV show Dekha Ek Khawaab. Male protagonist _Uday(Ashish Kapoor) Female protagonist _Manyata(Priyal Gor) I had loved this pair from the show DEK but it's rushed ending with less manveer chemistry disappointed me really. So now I'm publishing my own stories imagining them being the main leads.😊🤐 Storytrack is completely different from the original show. It is unedited so there are going to be lots of mistakes. But once I complete updating all the chapters I Would edit the book.
Manveer ff : His Love ❤ by manveer_fictions
Manveer ff : His Love ❤
manveer_fictions
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Basically all the characters are same as in the show as so in this story.But I have changed a bit the story line according to me. The story starts after when it reveals that moniya is the Princess Manyata of Devgarh riyasat .So Uday brings Manyata to Devgarh palace.(In this story Manyata is educated) This story is about Princess Manyata who is beautiful,cute,spunky and also badass by nature. The entry of Udayveer Singh,the charming and rich prince of Jaygarh riyasat makes drastic change in her life.Because he is attracted towards her.she will get the type of love from him which she has never imagined in her life.
Dekha ek khawaab rewritten by _the-curious-one_
Dekha ek khawaab rewritten
_the-curious-one_
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so long ago i used to watch this show called dekha ek khawaab. it had so much potential and scope for character development but the writers didn't do justice to the story line as a lot of characters remained underused and the main couple never got the required focus. so i am rewriting the show from the middle from where i think it started to go south. the story begin after episode 75 where komal takes manyata to meet akash and asks her to run away with him but she refuses. the difference here is that she doesn't go to the office akash interviews in but instead in the chawl. there is no problem with the jon as akash has got a good job without anyone's influence and does not come to fight with moniya. I think after this episode in the show manyata and uday's relationship started to become toxic where manyata was utterly selfis and naive, only went to him when she needed something and always ended up hurting him. also she ended up repeating the same mistaked which made the show go in circles. in my fanfiction uday and manyata are still friends and they are bonding very well. manyata's princess training is still going on under vijay's supervision and she is starting to bond with each and every member of the family. brijraj is still angry at her because of all the akash fiasco and jay is still a bitch. there is a lot of room for character development for manyata's characters which was not shown to us in the show as it ended midway and she remained the same confused maiden she was in the beginning. but i want to show how she can grow into a efficient Yuvrani of devgarh and a successful businesswoman. i didn't want to just remove akash because i don't want manyata to choose uday just because she doesn't have aby other option. i want her to choose him over everyone else. in short i want uday to sweep manyata away from under akash's nose.(evil smirk) so let me know how do you like the plot and whether or not i should continue the story.