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How thrilling is it to meet him behind closed doors? To hold hands beneath the table? And to steal kisses under the moonlight? But when morning comes, I am just my brother's sister-and he is my brother's best friend. Would this secret last? Athena Pamelle Tuazon is a girl who seems to have everything-wealth, status, and a loving family and friends. She has never dared to go beyond the walls of her comfort, for she already owns everything she could ever need. All she ever dreams of is to get closer to her long-time crush, Heather Zhan Malvar. But one unexpected connection pushes her to cross the lines that she once thought was her limit. And just like that, the walls she once lived in become the very boundaries that separate her from what she desires most. Now, all she ever wants is to protect it..hide him. However, that protection slowly causes them to go down the path they once believed was the same.

Nagpasalamat ako nang maraming beses kay Joaquin sa pagsama niya sa akin sa Admissions Office, and for walking me to the garden after. Nagpaalam na siya sa akin pagkatapos. I watched as his back slowly turned towards me, pero hindi pa man siya nakakalayo ng lakad ay lumingon ulit siya sa direksyon ko. 'We should hang out more.' he suddenly said. Napakunot ang noo ko. 'You know... as friends?' dugtong niya. Matagal lang kaming nagkatitigan, it took me a moment to process what he said. Tahimik lang din siya habang hinihintay ang sagot ko. He's really offering to be my friend. I guess we're really friends now? *** Anna Dominique, a deaf girl raised in a sheltered environment, is about to experience independence for the first time as she enters university. Determined to adjust on her own terms, she begins navigating unfamiliar spaces, routines, and expectations. Along the way, she meets Joaquin Isaia, who unexpectedly speaks her language, making it easier for her to find her footing in a world that once felt out of reach.

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Across countless lifetimes in countless parallel universes, Evo falls in love with Mireya. And in every life, fate punishes them for it. And so this time, Evo chooses to let her go.

‎Kaeliz Eunoia Serafin is a brokenhearted girl who no longer believes in love. After being hurt, she developed a strong distrust toward boys and thinks they are all unworthy of love, which makes her avoid any romantic feelings entirely. ‎ ‎Sage Wren Ridles, a basketball player surrounded by girls, has always believed that every girl eventually likes him. Confident and used to winning in his own game, he never thinks he can lose, even in woman's heart, until he met Kaeliz.

Ashanti Faith never lets anyone control her pace. As the bassist of Sunday Night, she lives the same way she plays, free, unpredictable, and impossible to keep. Jedidiah Yvo, Sunday Night's drummer, believes everything works better with rhythm, timing, and control. Chaos irritates him, especially when it comes in the form of Ashanti Faith. But what happens when the person who ruins your rhythm slowly becomes the only one who understands it? Started: May 19, 2026 Ended: -

Isang mundo kung saan napagod sa pagdalaw ang gabi. Sa mundo na ang pagtingin sa araw o sinag nito ay nakapipinsala. Kalamidad na hindi maipaliwanag ng sangkatauhan na kahit kailan man ay hindi masasagot ng agham. Isa lang ang pakatatandaan, huwag na huwag titingin sa itaas.

What will you do if you receive an admission email from the university you never applied to? No sender. No explanation. just one line: "You have been accepted for admission." Attached were your records, complete, verified, and impossibly accurate. Every detail about you... even the ones you never shared. It's the most elite university in the country. What happens after you enter? So- When a place like that chooses you without permission... Is it an opportunity- Or a warning?

「O N G O I N G」 February 5, 2026 Book Cover by my Ate Softy