Characters saying incorrect (but also very in character) quotes

People have different perspectives and theories of how the Afterlife looks like, but no one can truly tell what comes after death. Only a few teens have experienced paranormal activities which led them into a dimension unknown to the mankind called Mirror World. Many obstacles coming their way, but still keeping their heads up in the unknown enchanted world filled with chaos, darkness, love and more. ------------------ (This is the better version of my first 'Welcome in Mirror World' story. You no longer need to read that trash due to bad writing and bullshit lore, enjoy this one though :)) (Credits to myself for the sexy thumbnail that i made with help from Minecraft and Pinterest👏🏻) (Also credits to the beautiful @notrllythatb1tch for working together with me on this story👏🏻)

Ever wondered how the life after death looks like? After the 17 year old Kei found a ancient diary in the forest and build contact with the spirit trapped inside of it, his life was never the same again. (This Story...is pointless to read bc it's not canon anymore. I don't know if Mirror World will ever get fame, but if it does than the Wattpad story is not accurate to the canon story (the better written one) anymore. So yeah...enjoy the cringe."

Only one of our first drafts - We are currently re-writing the whole story in actual book-form :> ★ If we look into our mirrors we see ourselves. But if we stare too long, the world starts to feels surreal. Sometimes, like we aren't even looking at ourselves anymore. ⋆﹥━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━﹤⋆ "'You can't deny that you like the boy', he said. Again, Silence. Just the shouting and gun shots from the two teenagers. Pascal had hit a bird and Ida was scolding him for it. He seemed to enjoy her anger but he should've been terrified, that girl looked like she wasn't one to mess with. 'I can't', she finally said, turned around and walked inside. "Lust... Love would fit more.", he muttered to himself. ⋆﹥━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━﹤⋆ English isn't my first language, so please ignore any grammar mistakes. Also: I am writing this story with my bestie. His story is in the reading list in my account <3 Vote, comment and share ♡