(Not a death story) The dwarves are a few miles away form Mirkwood when Kili runs into Legolas, who was sent to see what route they were taking. When the two of them meet an even stranger elf, Haunlild (Hi-un-ild), a pack of orcs ambush the camp. Thorin thinks the elves were responsible for the attack and demands that they be tied and traded for a passage through Mirkwood. The only problem is that Fili has run off with Legolas and Haunild to save his brother from a terrible fate. Their little side quest uncovers some very big things happening in Middle Earth.

The hobbit originally had a chapter where the two brothers ran into a rushing river, so here is my twist on the tale. This is my first shot at writing some criticism or comments would be nice maybe even leave a vote

I as well as the entire hobbit fan group were extremely displeased by how Peter Jackson chose to end Fili and Kili's lives. I think we owe it to them to make it better, so here I go attempting to right that wrong, hope you guys like it, please leaves some comments and votes!