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Onalisa's Fate by ShekinahBlueming
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Onalisa's Fate [Edited 2025] Onalisa Gwen's life seemed perfect. Born into wealth, loved by her family, and set to inherit her grandfather Chairman Alfonso Gwen's empire-she was everything the world expected. But everything changes when the red string of fate appears, revealing a shocking truth: her future is tied to a simple farmer boy-the same man destined to bring ruin to her family and death to the Chairman. Desperate to protect their legacy, the Gwen family will do whatever it takes to break the bond. But fate cannot be rewritten. The more they resist, the closer they come to the very destruction they fear. Now, Onalisa must face the impossible: How do you stop what's already written? Can she defy fate-or change the heart of the man she's destined to love? In a world where destiny is the deadliest enemy, she must choose between protecting her world or embracing the love that could end it.
Secret Series #1 Hall Of Fame [COMPLETED] by Momoxxien
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"A woman's attitude is the best challenge for a true man's patience."
Paints And Photographs by melaxeli
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A love story of a photographer and a painter. Grant Cameron V. Arceo has a chronic Leukemia. He's been fighting it since he was a child. The reason why he disappeared from the sight of his hometown. Patrina Calderon, a childhood friend of Grant, doesn't know about it. She thought, the kid Grant just left them without a proper goodbye. But now, after 8 years. He's back. Grant is back. What could possibly go wrong in this reunion? Date started: 2017 Date finished: 2025
YOUTH LOVE[COMPLETED] by spicyerisa
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How can you find true love now that you are surrounded by cheaters.?
LOST IN THE MIDDLE OF LOVE  [ON-GOING] by EthelRaxx
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What will happen if two people found love at the wrong time? Sabi ng kanta " We have the right love at the wrong time." Maling panahon nga ba? O nasa maling tao ka lang? Kailan mo ba masasabi na nasa tamang tao ka? They say don't play with love because you are playing with fire. Now can these two make it to life? Can love save someone from hurting. Is love enough for someone to stay? Let's all begin their journey :) [ AMORE SERIES 1] Started : 01/29/22 Ended :. ---/---/--- ⭐ EthelRaxx ⭐
Luxious Academy 1: Realm Of The Elementals (COMPLETED) by Arcanum_Writes
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𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐬: COMPLETED (BOOK 1 of 2) SOON UNDER REVISION 𝐇𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐑𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡𝐞𝐝: 1 in Dark Side, Princesses, Darkness 2 in Power, Elements, Darkmagic "What's your elemental power?" What do you expect when someone just lost a special person in her life? Of course, they'll be different from what they really are. Samantha Luna, or Sam to be called, was just a happy-go-lucky girl when she was a kid not until a tragic day came into her life. Not once, but twice. And then from that year ahead, she became reckless, bully, and the happy-go-lucky girl immidiately vanished and replaced by a girl who anyone never thought. A long year after that tragic thing, she already lost the hope and the thrill to her life. She already lost the meaning of her life so she think of ending it. And it eventually answered. She was drown under the luminous water. She thought she was dead, but then... She just really enter a world she never thought that was existing.
He's 5 Years Older Than Me [YOUNG LOVE SERIES#1] by donnionsxx04
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Limang lalaking may kakaibang karisma ang pinakatinitilian sa campus, kung saan mga prinsipe sa mata ng kababaihan. May kanya-kanya silang estilo ng pang-aakit: Si Brix Callejo, ang astig na Playboy. Si Kieffer Sarmento, ang matalino pero mapanuksong Heartbreaker. Si Stephen Lloyd Martinez, ang simpleng pero charming na Good Boy. Si Louis Develia, ang preskong Fighter na may tindig na nakaka kilig. At si Lance Maximo Rezalde a.k.a 'Ax' , ang tahimik ngunit misteryosong Bad Boy na lalo lang gumuwapo sa kanyang suplado look. Ako si Klarrise Develia, at dahil kapatid ko si Kuya Louis, itinuring nila akong prinsesa-walang sinumang maaaring lumapit o lumigaw sa akin. Pero paano kung ang puso ko ay mahulog sa isa sa kanila? At paano kung siya ang tanging bawal kong mahalin? Next: When the Train stops (YOUNG LOVE SERIES#2)