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10 stories
Broken But Not Defeate by RomeaNoel
Broken But Not Defeate
RomeaNoel
  • Reads 227
  • Votes 7
  • Parts 6
When Beauty was little her world as perfect but that didn't last. Why would anyone want happiness. when her father tells her she isn't wanted her leaves in search of herself and her real mother what she finds is a life and possible a guy that she never knew was out there.Can she keep her head on straight or will she be caught in a world that is out of control. As she get older memories from her past and an event she worked so hard to forget keep resurfacing
Perfection by lydvarn
Perfection
lydvarn
  • Reads 4,022
  • Votes 118
  • Parts 11
I used to think I was the perfect one, but looking at him now, as the yellow rays of sun catch in his deep, brown eyes, I wonder if I was mistaken all along; that he was perfection, and I was the mistake. He turns to look at me, mouth curving into a smile that's made only for me. “You look at me as though I'm an angel,” he says softly, leaning in closer. I shrug, embarrassed. I want to tell him that that's exactly what I think; that in this moment he is an angel, that I hope he'll always be one to me. But I don't. I keep my mouth shut and look away. “I feel bad.” I say shortly. He stirs a little, hiding his annoyance. “Why?” I leave the question hanging. We both know the answer anyway.
Dear Mr Blind Date, Are You Mr Right? (Completed) by beautifulatsunrise
Dear Mr Blind Date, Are You Mr Right? (Completed)
beautifulatsunrise
  • Reads 2,627,023
  • Votes 39,324
  • Parts 36
Chloe Manson is a successful interior designer. Never mind the fact that her mum keeps setting up blind dates with the wrong guys, her life is otherwise quite normal and peaceful. She has a steady job, good friends and a pretty grotty apartment. What more can she ask? That is, until a new sexy stranger takes over as the boss of the company where she works at. He's irritating, obnoxious and infuriating. So why does she keep stealing glimpses into his office? Ed Hardy is determined to prove to his father that he is capable of managing a business as well as his perfect brother whom he can never measure up to. Originally anticipating that the working hours would be long and boring, he didn't expect to meet a lovely woman whom he can't seem to take his eyes off. Calling her into his office on the pretext of giving her work, he can't seem to reach into her heart. He knows that in his eyes, he's a bad boy through and through. So why doesn't he seem to be able to forget her like the numerous other women before?
Dreams and Disasters by ZuzuSF
Dreams and Disasters
ZuzuSF
  • Reads 3,899
  • Votes 688
  • Parts 14
A tripping tale of a young Girl who embarks upon layers of trouble in a struggle to find herself in time to solve the mysterious case of her Cousin. On top of this, she has to put up with the abnormal dreams shes been getting at night. Will she be able to cope with the spine chilling dreams as well as trying to solve the daunting case? And what happens when she finds out about a life changing secret that her Cousin Tyra has been hiding from her for all of her life? (Watty Awards 2012-Please vote!).
How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending by juliapearlmeg
How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending
juliapearlmeg
  • Reads 13,736
  • Votes 606
  • Parts 5
This is your classic boy meets girl story. Vincent is sitting at a coffee shop, reading a book. All of a sudden, Harper walks in, dripping wet from the pouring rain. He offers his handkerchief to her, not knowing that it will be the start of their love story. Vince does all the romantic things, like in the movies. But, as said in the title, he doesn't get the ending he expects.
Summer Love by rosynarry
Summer Love
rosynarry
  • Reads 4,428
  • Votes 98
  • Parts 22
Mackenzie the broken bad girl and Carter the egotistical bad boy; it's like a match made in heaven right? You've got to think again. © rosynarry 2013 all rights reserved.
Woebegone by Konstanze
Woebegone
Konstanze
  • Reads 12,059
  • Votes 388
  • Parts 16
Under intensive revision. Ignore this work for the mean time.
Being Anna Marie by Shareese86
Being Anna Marie
Shareese86
  • Reads 18,165
  • Votes 596
  • Parts 37
My name is Anna Marie Cortez. I'm sixteen years old. A year ago I was no different than you are. And now... And now I reside in Glover Dale Mental Institution a.k.a the freaking nut house. Let me guess, your wondering why? Well apparently I tried to drown my baby sister in our family's bath tub ...Or so they say. My memory of that night is still a little fuzzy...
Getting Back at 'Mr Right' by Heartbeatxox
Getting Back at 'Mr Right'
Heartbeatxox
  • Reads 9,274
  • Votes 205
  • Parts 14
Milly Cartright had always wanted the perfect family; she wanted a baby to hold in her arms and a husband to love her as she did so. When she met James Hughes, she thought he was 'Mr Right' and decided right away that she loved him, she had to, right? What happens when she finds out that he hasn’t been as faithful and loving as she’d hoped he was? Obviously, Milly decides it’s time to take revenge on ‘Mr Right’ and have fun doing so!
Accidental Love (Watty Awards 2012) by maiagujo
Accidental Love (Watty Awards 2012)
maiagujo
  • Reads 261,226
  • Votes 4,942
  • Parts 25
18 year old Anne was just released from the custody of her foster parents. She spent 9 horrible years with them, and at last, those days are over. She's finally free to start a new life. That's what she thought. On the day of her release, She got hit by a car. Anne soon found herself in a hospital with a broken leg, two broken ribs, and a boy sleeping quietly beside her bed. Who is this boy and what does he have to do with the accident? Could he be the change in Anne's life that she so desperately needs?