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The Heinous Prodigies Book One: The Lost Dreamer by SEscuadro
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When fifteen-year-old Eden Paris discovers that not only is she not human but rather, a descendant of gods and angels, a demiangel, she is plunged into the world of the Ethereal Society, a society of the higher half-bloods. Eden is determined to sever herself from the world she thought only existed in books and fairytales but it seems that the only way to get out of the mess her Scent caused her was to tie herself to the handsome yet intolerable and haughty young William Sage as his Consor, a warrior sworn by blood and soul to protect his other to death. Something stirs outside of the protective barrier of the Sanctuary. More and more demiangels have been reported kidnapped and hadn't been discovered nor heard from anyone. When Eden learns that her best friend is in grave danger, she is drawn deeper into the secrets of the Hidden World. In this adventure packed novel, Eden learns that some things are rather much better off hidden under the covers of her books.
Ogre by YourFavoriteAlien
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Harper Smith has never had a problem or care in her life, that is, until Grant (Ogre) Ogilvie walks into her seventh period class room. His shadowy persona engulfs the room as he stands in the doorway, surveying the surroundings. After class ends, Harper offers him a ride home. Little does she know, Grant has more than a few devils controlling his life. Tagline: The devils are in his details.
Save Me by IheartScar
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Writing is Amore only escape from the cruel world she lives in. In every story there is always a monster. In her story it is him. Amore could call him many things monster, hell or even dad. Now that it is summer time Amore goes and works for the local Coffee Shop like she has been doing for the past four summers. But when one day a man by the name of Jason walks into the Coffee Shop she is faced with maybe the biggest challenge in her life…love. How can someone who has shut everyone out ever love anyone? Or maybe Jason will be the one who can save her?
Silver Waves(Book 1Living Treasures) by NaominParaInk
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A promise to her dying mother to find her enstranged brother, leads Anna-Marie Hawkins into an the adventure of a lifetime. As she searches she'll encounter pirates, mutineers, traitors,betrayal-- and love? Will mild-mannered Anna learn how to survive in the world of harsh men, or die trying?
The Princess Switch by loviedovy12
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"The last thing I knew I was being thrown into a sack." Princess Adriana lived a quiet life...that is if you consider constantly avoiding assassination attempts quiet! All her life she had been trained not to question why so many people were out to get her, but after being kidnapped things change. She starts to wonder about both these mysterious people and herself, and discovers some shocking secrets.
Eternal by itsdestinyrose
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Selene has just lost her entire family in a horrible house fire and her friends to high-school rumors. Slowly she is beginning to slip. She doesn't know what to do anymore, Her nightmares have been relentlessly consuming and she cannot help but to feel guilty. Devastated over the accident and her realization that she is all alone, she goes to the one place that she is never judged, the only place where she feels like she isn't utterly alone: the cemetery that her family now lay in. She arrives with a plan made. The knife is placed precisely on her wrist as she closes her eyes in anticipation of the relief to come when she abruptly opens them to the gates screeching open. And then she sees him. Climbing a tree She watches him from a safe distance. Watching him, she experiences strange electric tingles coursing through her entire body, when he sees her up in the tree and smiles warmly Something awakens deep within her as she feels the deja vu hit, and she recognizes him. Strange memories of the past rush to the surface. She knows. Once, a lifetime ago, they had loved each other so immensely that they would have died for one another. And she had done exactly that to save him.
How the Mighty Have Fallen by wickerflames
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(ON HOLD/HIATUS) They seem to know everything about me. Where I came from. Who my family is. Who I am. The only thing left secret is my name. To them, I am Periculum, just Periculum, for I am told I am lesser than them. They tell me I am the only one alive.. they tell me to join them. Join their cause. I .. I can't do that.. It's inhuman. Needless to say, they are not human themselves..
Lurk by SamHayler
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Adapt or die. That’s the only rule. Kill, or be killed. Eat, or be eaten. Are you ready for the apocalypse?
Throwback by ACertainLady__
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Shane McMillan's summer is over. He messed up, he really did. But he remembers the beginning. The way she had come into his life all of a sudden, a whirlwind of spontaneous, a blur of winks and smiles. She took risks and jumped boundaries. She was like a gypsy, moving to new places, pulling Shane along behind her. He wants to go back. Start over. Do it again. Rewind. Throwback.
Memoirs of a Fallen God by Dermit
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Once I was a god. Worshiped. Revered. The huddled masses cast themselves at my feet, heads bowed and eyes wide. Save us, they begged. Spare us, they pleaded. And, fool that I was, I tried. Now I am nothing. Fallen. A bitter memory of an age long passed. A broken old fool too stubborn to die. This is my story. My rise, my fall. The pathetic mess, after. Read it. Don’t. I care little. My words are not for you.