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Haruka Sekai (はるか 世界) by secretlarkspur
Haruka Sekai (はるか 世界)
secretlarkspur
  • Reads 1,172
  • Votes 52
  • Parts 9
Underneath the cradle is a blade that steals the infant’s innocence. The white sheets are besmirched with blood poured down for ruthless traditions meant to preserve power and wealth among hands who toss chalices as they seat at the thrones of mighty palaces. But they cannot appease my inconsolable tears with their empty promises of glory and riches, for they whose lips taste the finest wine shall not speak about their dark secrets. There is a distant world where I wish to meet the person in my future who will set me free from this fate. I look for him, yet he finds me before I find him. But when I find that person, is it really him?
What is Love?(ON HOLD FOR A COUPLE WEEKS) by Vicnicoleee_
What is Love?(ON HOLD FOR A COUPLE WEEKS)
Vicnicoleee_
  • Reads 397
  • Votes 14
  • Parts 9
What is Love?thats what Alison Smith asks herself.alisons parents are getting a divorce so she is shipped off to her Aunt Kellys for the summer in South Carolina.There she meets the hot, popular,cocky,and arrogont guy down the street Luke Reynolds.A lot can happen over the summer.Will Alison be able to figure out what love is or will she be left heartbroken?
I think I die on prom night by Lily-Mia
I think I die on prom night
Lily-Mia
  • Reads 853
  • Votes 25
  • Parts 5
Lily is 16 years old, it's her prom night and she's dying. Determined to have a good time Lily forgets her childhood dream, the one where she dies on her prom night. Despite the hints dropped all evening Lily forgets she's even dying. This could be the best, the worst, or the last night of her life...
How to be Famous by loviedovy12
How to be Famous
loviedovy12
  • Reads 13,118
  • Votes 189
  • Parts 14
JJ was your normal high school girl. She was just another typical wallflower, the sufferer in silence type. She took life for what it was, never expecting it to turn upside down. Out of all the things JJ had imagined to happen to her she never would imagined becoming a model. So when she was discovered by a famous modeling company everybody was shocked, including herself. With no experience whatsoever in modeling, she decides to give it her best shot! Afterall, it couldn’t hurt.... Being a model sure sounded like a great idea, but in reality it was hard work and far from the glamorous life she had imagined. In fact, it actually worsened things for her. Suddenly her best friend became her worst enemy, and her old enemy is her new boyfriend? The sad thing was that JJ did not even care. When you are a model, shouldn’t you act like a model too? However, JJ was far from giving up. She discovers the hidden parts of the fashion world away from the media. A part of life she begins to love...and maybe she was in love! Like a coin with two sides JJ is slowly learning to accept the good, bad and worse. But is it enough? Will her inner strength hold her till the end? Will she be able to live up to everybody's expectations? Or will she not only lose her best friend and job, but also her two loves?
The Devil in the Black Suit by 19tktktk19
The Devil in the Black Suit
19tktktk19
  • Reads 10,299
  • Votes 379
  • Parts 12
Riya, an angel, is the top flier in her class, training to fight with the Angel Army against the Demons of Hell. But when she is kidnapped by James, a devil with whom she shares a special connection, her eyes are opened to a whole new world. Will their forbidden love prevail, or will they both be destroyed by the evil force haunting Hell?
Before the Sky Fell by whikerms
Before the Sky Fell
whikerms
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  • Votes 11,543
  • Parts 44
[Featured Story and Wattpad Prize Winner 2014] When Malachi, an exiled murder, activates a magic relic and duplicates his world, he uses his newly found power to win over the Larks, dog-like creatures from the North. Seeking to locate his missing daughter and plot revenge on those responsible for her disappearance, Malachi marches south, leaving destruction in his wake. Whik Winfield, a young, adventurous Hemonstalian, is swept up in the chaos. He escapes with fellow survivors to the mysterious island of Sebolt, leaving everything he knew behind, including his best friend Sonora. Whik hoped peace could be restored in his new home, but when he finds a mysterious device and creates a world of his own, his troubles double. Can Whik understand how to wield his world-building power before Malachi takes it all away? When the path of worlds can change with a shift in the wind, Whik learns that all second chances come with a price. This dark fantasy novel interweaves Whik's story at ages 9 and 17, as he comes to terms with creating another him, attempts to stop the fall of his nation from a ruthless murderer, and realizes that in order to save the girl he loves in one world, he may have to die in another.