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Revenant by _kaylaxmarie
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Clara Anderson and her aunt move to a town in the Capricorn Coast of Queensland. Everything was normal for a while and then everything began to change for Clara when she met a girl in the local Cafe. What she thought was just an ordinary town with people who were just plain psychotic, turned out to be a suburb full of Revenants - vampires who were unlike any she had ever read about. It was every man for himself when night time falls. At least, that's how it was explained. After a fight with her aunt - who so happened to already 'know' the dangers of the town - she moves in with the most unlikliest of friends; the people who told her all the towns secrets in the first place and the girl that had changed her life with a story. In an apartment next door to them, she experiences more a less of the towns abnormality; a crazy ghost girl desperate for peace in the apartment she is 'trying' to live in. Believe it or not; a ghost girl, a town full of Revenants and a group of psycho wannabe-revenants who like to stab people with needles, are only a fraction of Clara's now adrenaline required life. There are more secrets that her aunt is holding from her than ever imagined; for example, did her mother really die to save her? Or is there much much more to the story than she is letting on? Will Clara be able to survive in the town of Emu Park, or will she end up just another headline in the towns 'freak deaths' column? Death. Blood. Love and Loyalty. Revenant is the adventure to 'die' for. ONLY AVAILABLE ON WATTPAD. All Rights Reserved. A novel by @_kaylaxmarie Cover by @Xx1D_Diana_mcxX Trailer by @CottonCandySugarh
Soulless Creature by marsy7
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You're not supposed to fall in love with the damned. Lucy doesn't live a happy life. Between school, her loneliness, and her abusive father, it's a struggle to keep her head above water. It should've been a fresh start when Lucy moves to a new school. While it's fresh, it's far from normal - especially when Drake, a sinister yet irresistible guy, keeps getting in her way. Soon after, eerie deaths begin to occur around the town and no one can explain them. They aren't regular murders and there is no evidence. Lucy begins to be suspicious of the red-haired boy at her new school. Is Drake just a beautiful, vulnerable guy with captivating eyes and a horrible past? Or could he be something more? Could the burning animosity in his eyes be lethal? THIS BOOK HAS BEEN PUBLISHED ON AMAZON. THE LINK IS ON MY PROFILE. Cover done by @_kaylaxmarie