ℑ𝔫 𝔞 𝔭𝔯𝔢𝔭 𝔰𝔠𝔥𝔬𝔬𝔩 𝔴𝔦𝔱𝔥 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔱𝔯𝔦𝔠𝔱𝔢𝔰𝔱 𝔯𝔲𝔩𝔢𝔰, 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔱𝔯𝔦𝔠𝔱𝔢𝔰𝔱 𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔯𝔦𝔠𝔲𝔩𝔲𝔪, 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔱𝔯𝔦𝔠𝔱𝔢𝔰𝔱 𝔰𝔢𝔠𝔲𝔯𝔦𝔱𝔶, 𝔏𝔲𝔪𝔦 𝔗𝔢𝔪𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔱 𝔄𝔡𝔞𝔦𝔯 𝔦𝔰 𝔬𝔣𝔱𝔢𝔫.... 𝔅𝔬𝔯𝔢𝔡. 𝔙𝔢𝔯𝔶 𝔟𝔬𝔯𝔢𝔡. 𝔄𝔰 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔡𝔞𝔲𝔤𝔥𝔱𝔢𝔯 𝔬𝔣 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔠𝔥𝔬𝔬𝔩'𝔰 𝔱𝔬𝔭 𝔰𝔭𝔬𝔫𝔰𝔬𝔯, 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔦𝔰 𝔳𝔢𝔯𝔶 𝔩𝔦𝔱𝔱𝔩𝔢 𝔰𝔥𝔢 𝔠𝔞𝔫 𝔤𝔢𝔱 𝔦𝔫 𝔱𝔯𝔬𝔲𝔟𝔩𝔢 𝔣𝔬𝔯. 𝔅𝔲𝔱 𝔰𝔥𝔢 𝔩𝔦𝔨𝔢𝔰 𝔭𝔲𝔰𝔥𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔩𝔦𝔪𝔦𝔱𝔰, 𝔭𝔲𝔰𝔥𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔟𝔲𝔱𝔱𝔬𝔫𝔰, 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔭𝔲𝔰𝔥𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔱𝔢𝔞𝔠𝔥𝔢𝔯'𝔰 𝔤𝔩𝔞𝔰𝔰𝔢𝔰 𝔣𝔯𝔬𝔪 𝔴𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔶 𝔭𝔲𝔯𝔭𝔬𝔰𝔢𝔣𝔲𝔩𝔩𝔶 𝔣𝔞𝔩𝔩 𝔞𝔱 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔱𝔦𝔭𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔦𝔯 𝔫𝔬𝔰𝔢𝔰. 𝔚𝔥𝔞𝔱 𝔴𝔦𝔩𝔩 𝔦𝔱 𝔱𝔞𝔨𝔢 𝔣𝔬𝔯 𝔥𝔢𝔯 𝔰𝔠𝔥𝔬𝔬𝔩 𝔱𝔬 𝔣𝔦𝔫𝔞𝔩𝔩𝔶 𝔣𝔞𝔩𝔩? ℑ𝔱'𝔰 𝔥𝔢𝔯, 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔞𝔱𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔠 𝔟𝔬𝔪𝔟 𝔬𝔣 𝔓𝔯𝔬𝔡𝔦𝔤𝔦𝔬𝔲𝔰 𝔓𝔯𝔢𝔭, 𝔞𝔤𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔱𝔦𝔣𝔣𝔢𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔲𝔠𝔞𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫 𝔭𝔯𝔬𝔣𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔬𝔫𝔞𝔩𝔰 𝔦𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔠𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔱𝔯𝔶. 𝔚𝔥𝔬 𝔴𝔦𝔩𝔩 𝔟𝔢 𝔳𝔦𝔠𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔦𝔬𝔲𝔰?

My short story for a contest I'm entering in. Please give me your truthful thoughts! Harsh criticism welcomed (as long as it doesn't require me to completely rewrite my story, since I don't have time). Thank you!!! <3

ＳＡＲＣＡＳＭ 𝟏. 𝐀 𝐜𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠, 𝐨𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐧 𝐢𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐜 𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐭 𝐨𝐫 𝐫𝐢𝐝𝐢𝐜𝐮𝐥𝐞. 𝟐. 𝐀 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐦 𝐨𝐟 𝐰𝐢𝐭 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐳𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐤𝐬. 𝟑. 𝐀 𝐛𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐚𝐮𝐧𝐭 𝐨𝐫 𝐠𝐢𝐛𝐞, 𝐨𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐚 𝐭𝐚𝐮𝐧𝐭; 𝐚 𝐛𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫, 𝐜𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧; 𝐚 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐥 𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐨𝐫 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧, 𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐝 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐧 𝐨𝐫 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐩𝐭; 𝐢𝐧 𝐫𝐡𝐞𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐢𝐜, 𝐚 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐦 𝐨𝐟 𝐢𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐲; 𝐛𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐲. Yeah, I think I'll go with my own definition. ＳＡＲＣＡＳＭ 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐲 𝐚 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐫𝐞𝐩𝐥𝐢𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐚 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐝𝐮𝐦𝐛 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭. Sarcastic Paris has never really believed in having friends, her overflowing sarcasm seems to be enough. But when Lucas, Lillian, and Justin suddenly come into her life, she has second thoughts. Sarcasm will always be her best friend...but maybe there was room for other kinds of friends too. Disclaimer: If found on any site other than Wattpad, it's a malware. The mirrors sites are a scam and mostly contain virus and may harm your device

𝐓𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐯𝐞 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐖𝐢𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐨𝐠 𝐂𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐞𝐥 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐞𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞 𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐖𝐢𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐟𝐢𝐯𝐞. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞'𝐬 𝐚 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐂𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐞𝐥 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥--𝐢𝐟 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐤. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭'𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠, 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐤. 𝐈𝐧 𝐟𝐚𝐜𝐭, 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐝𝐨𝐠𝐬 𝐜𝐚𝐧. 𝐈𝐭'𝐬 𝐚 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐝𝐨𝐠𝐬 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐬𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐧 𝐭𝐨 𝐤𝐞𝐞𝐩 𝐢𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐡𝐮𝐬𝐡 𝐡𝐮𝐬𝐡. 𝐈𝐭 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐝𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐡𝐮𝐦𝐚𝐧 𝐭𝐨 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐖𝐢𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐬 𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐤 𝐭𝐨, 𝐚 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐝 𝐬𝐥𝐢𝐩𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭 𝐢𝐬 𝐨𝐮𝐭. 𝐒𝐡𝐞'𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐨𝐧 𝐚 𝐜𝐫𝐚𝐳𝐲 𝐣𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐞𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐬𝐩𝐲 𝐝𝐨𝐠𝐬, 𝐦𝐢𝐧𝐝 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐥, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧. 𝐖𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭 𝐩𝐮𝐭 𝐖𝐢𝐥𝐥𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐟𝐢𝐫𝐞? 𝐎𝐫 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐢𝐭 𝐛𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐯

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The Jackal bounded up the staircase, four at a time. I quickly assessed my situation and surroundings. Just as The Jackal reached the top of the stairs, I jumped onto the balcony railing. "Lily!" James screamed. "What are you doing?" I looked behind me and saw The Jackal drawing nearer. Then I jumped off the railing. -------- Lily Rose doesn't have a normal hobby. Her life isn't simple or graceful. It's the opposite. Her life, Is kinda crazy. Warning: This was made a while ago, and the writing isn't very good XD

𝐀𝐥𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐦𝐛𝐞𝐫! 𝐈𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐚 𝐦𝐞𝐦𝐞, 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐲 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐝. 𝐈𝐭 𝐭𝐢𝐬 𝐚𝐧 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐨𝐫 -𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐌𝐞𝐦𝐞 𝐐𝐮𝐞𝐞𝐧

𝘈𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘢 𝘴𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘭 𝘧𝘪𝘦𝘭𝘥 𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘱 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘨 𝘐𝘷𝘰𝘳𝘺 𝘙𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘰𝘤𝘢𝘭 𝘻𝘰𝘰, 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘢 𝘤𝘦𝘳𝘵𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘱𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳. ꜰʀɪᴇɴᴅꜱ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ɪɴ ᴀʟʟ ꜱʜᴀᴘᴇꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱɪᴢᴇꜱ...ᴛʜᴇ ɪᴍᴘᴏʀᴛᴀɴᴛ ᴛʜɪɴɢ ɪꜱ ɴᴏᴛ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴏᴏᴋ ʟɪᴋᴇ, ʙᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴏʟᴇ ᴛʜᴇʏ ᴘʟᴀʏ ɪɴ ᴏᴜʀ ʟɪꜰᴇ. Disclaimer: If found on any site other than Wattpad, it's a malware. The mirrors sites are a scam and mostly contain virus and may harm your device