This is just me ranting about why I hate the majority of the fanfics here. I am also a fanfic writer and have written several of these stories in a bad manner in the past! The keyword is "PAST." No one should be telling you how to write because you should have learned how to do it in high school!
You can also use this as a guide to not fuck up FanFic.
-LordCraft1st
the world is full of order and chaos, and Ravel knows this very well, she got pregnant at 13, she has to overcome the challenges of a teenage mother, to raise her son.
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